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Sasukeishawt
2009-07-20 . chapter 1
Wow, HOT story, and yes, even though I don't usually like beast, this story is an exception. Sasu/Oro, while the theory is kinda disgusting, is quite hot when you read it, especially the way you write it. Though you should think of other descriptions for Sasuke other than the teen. I mean you might as well just call him Sasuke because it's like: "the teen did this, the teen did that, the snake ** the teen" how about the boy, the Uchiha, the raven, and not the TEEN all the time?
BloodyRoseSharpThorn
2009-05-02 . chapter 2
start this again please?
NekoShina
2009-01-20 . chapter 1
wow
i mean im not the type of person to be into animal sex but that was just hot!!
update soon!
animelover inf
2009-01-12 . chapter 2
I love this story. It's awsome. I love the description.
naruto34
2009-01-09 . chapter 2
that was hot do another one !
Fumera
2008-10-23 . chapter 2
Lol ^^ pretty entertaining again! I'm loving this quite a bit, though 'odd' in its own way, but still awesome.
Love assassination
2008-10-09 . chapter 2
"he could feel the snake inside him pound away rapidly like there was no tomorrow."
This made me laugh, seriously. XD

I love your stories. You make all my fantasies become reality, ghehe. I've always wished to write a story about Sasuke's .. 'training'.. with the snakes.

Very well done!!
Axletia Rosonetis
2008-08-21 . chapter 2
Wow. Good OroSasu ! =D
PrissyNarutoLover4Ever
2008-07-22 . chapter 2
WHOA!! When i read the summery i was like O.o cuz like i hate snakes but having sex with sasuke i was like ook!! i decided to read it cuz i just had to see how can u have sex with a freaking snake and maybe laugh a litte but i as hell didnt expect that to be sexy!! but u proved me wrong it was soo HOT and freaking sexy!! Update soon!! I really liked it!! LOL!!
Sunny
2008-06-17 . chapter 2
oh! I like.
This was a very interesting story, I'd love to read more!
So if you are willing to write yet another chapter, you have a very enthusiastic reader waiting!

Thanks for the yummyness
BEL-ALOU
2008-06-15 . chapter 2
WHEE! Loved it! Please do another chapter! GWAH!

^_^
LoyalAngel
2008-06-08 . chapter 2
wow, that was an awesome chapter, i think it's really good with the snake sex too ^-^
fadedsolitude28
2008-03-19 . chapter 2
Omg..Update soon! :)
Dragon77
2008-03-13 . chapter 2
I love it the lemon scene was so hot. I hope you add a 3rd chapter.
SasukesRevenge7
2008-03-11 . chapter 2
>3 M lemons. Very very nice. I never thought SnakeSasuke could be so.. sexeh! xD I think you should make a 3rd chapter.

And a 4th. >3
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