PLEASE Update! I know what it is like to write a story, then suddenly not want to write it after, but I fufilled everyone, even if it felt like work! Please, you must know what it is like to read a story you love to death, and it hasn't updateed. My heart burns with passion as I await a new chapter! If it if homework, or sorrow you are dealing with, I will not nag, but if it is writers block, you can overcome it! Please, for your fans!

You have to keep writing this story! PLEASE! I will give you cookies, flowers, heck I'll even throw in a pet rabbit! (This is all virtual you know ;) ) But seriously, you just updated a story part way through July. Could you finish this one?

I have no idea how to pronounce any of those names and i'm not a big fan of long names, but I think it was pretty good. A

Boy, Kankuro's at his crankiest in this chapter, lol.

Anyways, it's a great story to put your efforts into! I'll be watching you! (For the author alert, that is. P)

I was writing this chapter at night, and when I wrote the Nezumi part, I even got a little spooked, because my desk is right next to the window, and then it thundered. xD

I loved how Kankuro ran into the pillar. It's exactly how i'd expect Kankuro to act around someone he likes. Very goos chapter, keep up the good work.

i like it so far. you have plenty of kankuro for us kankuro fans! yay!

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are there any other kankuro fans out there besides me?

Good chapter. I can't wait for the next.

I liked it, but TentenXKankurou is really getting played out why not someone new like Tsunade are somthing that be cool.

Yipee! I can finally upload the documents now! It took so long because for some annoying inconvenient unknown reason there was an error. But I was so happy when I managed to upload Chapters 3 and 4!

... I am APPALLED.

Joo need more EMOTION, lady/man. Your grammar and punctuation is perfect, but everything you write is to... factual? That seems like an appropriate word.

This story still rocks my g-strings, though.

Go and be the awesome writer/artist that you are!

Ah. My dear friend.

You are pretty good at writing, but try to ad more emotion.

I have just read teh first chapter, so don't get mad.

I LOVE IT

Very good so far! I can't wait for you to update this.

It really is rare to find a good story on this site now a days, and yours so far looks to be one of those rare ones. Just a thing are to that worry, please dont start making this story focesed on the two OC charetors you showed in the fristed ch., number two Kankurou really isn't that whinny and i'am fairly shore Kankurou has more stamina then Temari from what his stats show.

K. Stats

Ninjutsu:4

Taijutsu:2.5

Intellignce:3.5

power:3

speed:2

Genjutsu:2

stamina:7

Seal Knowledga:4

T. Stats

Ninjutsu:4

Taijutsu:2.5

Intellignce:3.5

Genjutsu:2

Power:4

speed:2.5

Stamina:2.5

Seal Knowledge:3

These stats are on a 5 point scale. These stats are from the end of part one of Naruto so the both most liklly stronger but i hope they give you a better idea of the powers. Other then that this is one of the best stories i've read in mounths.