Very lovely one-shot :)
I love the Lost in Blue games :D Awesome, awesome series! Though I've never had any of my characters die... maybe almost die? lol But never died. I found that Lost in Blue: Shipwrecked was the hardest to keep them alive or even kept them fed - honestly! They eat like sumo wrestles in it lol
I should play those games again sometime... xD

Man, it's been forever since I played this. Before I discovered fanfiction lol. I finally started playing it again today after my friend pointed out that I had it, and I had never beaten it. So of course I decided to look up fanfiction xD

I really like it, you did a great job! The ideas you came up with made me laugh quite hard actually, such as being allergic to those flowers xD

Chika

This is awesome! and this game is REALLY HARD! I could not finish it (They kept on dying) And there wasn't any animals left after I caught 8 deers in 2 weeks...I manage to discover the ruins and the 3rd beach though...anyways this is really good!

hi there _. I just got this game. I played one as well and I was thinking of writtiing a fanfic of this too. I really love the way yours came out. do you mind if I use mabey two of your ideals for later on my fic? I've all ready started to write mine. it'll be a lot longer but I really really love your story _.

Great story. Could use another chapter. On the bottom line,great fanfic

That was pretty good, and if you finished the game, can you please give me cheats for it? I've been concentrating more on Lost in Blue 2, which is a lot better.

Awesome! I suggested this category a year ago, and here it is. This is a great story. Hope to see another one from you!

OMG! SO CUTE! I LOVE IT! I'm just recently furiously trying to beat this game, and looking for ANY hints of Jack and Amy. This fanfic just fed my strange fetish! Lol.

Please right nore! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! I seriously need more fics like this to keep sane!

You're So good at writing! I'm jealous!

Write more please! PLEASE!

me likey. i have no clue who these peoples are but me likey

Hey, this was really clever. I just got Lost In Blue 2 over the weekend. Man this game is hard... Anyway great job, I really liked this.