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mousefiction
2009-10-23 . chapter 1
That was great. I love tags to this episode.
supergirl3684
2007-07-01 . chapter 1
beautiful!!
FBI Bones
2007-03-31 . chapter 1
I've been wanting to watch Supernatural for ages and in February I found had them, so I watched up to 'Born under a Bad Sign' and then there wasn't any more, next day they had all been taken down ::sigh:: I've read summaries for 'Heart' so have a basic idea of what happened and can't wait until I can find somewhere where I can actually watch it (along with the other episodes I haven't seen) as I can't watch Supernatural on the TV for a couple of reasons.
I really liked this tag, it was well written and flowed nicely. It's really great to see you writing something other than SG1 (although I still love all of them) well done and thank you for posting!

~Red~
PointOfView
2007-03-26 . chapter 1
OMG! This is without a doubt the way the episode kept going. How did you know exactly how to finish it?!?!?! No joke! This is how the show would have progressed if the silly old programmers would get a clue and know I'd gladly watch an hour and ten minute episode of Supernatural... as happily as any Lost or Heroes fan eats up the extra few minutes they get in airtime.

I cannot believe how perfectly you captured this! Seriously, except for the fact that I pictured Dean going to Sam, this is the *exact* way I pictured the ep ending! I mean Sam stroking out and not breathing until Dean told him to is exactly what I had pictured... and you wrote it all out so beautifully and with such amazing feeling...

I AM ABSOLUTELY FREAKIN' AWESTRUCK!

THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU!

Please write more Supernatural fiction! You totally get this show and the characters and as a bonus you're a fantastic writer! AMAZING JOB!

PERFECTION! :-)
freaker
2007-03-25 . chapter 1
good job.
TraSan
2007-03-25 . chapter 1
Blasted site wouldn't let me review yesterday. I'm nothing if not persistent, so I'm back today. (c:

Excellent tag! That episode was heart-breaking enough, but these lines added to it...

Forehead pressed against the older man’s chest as they rocked, Sam confessed brokenly, “We’re not gonna to make it” Because nobody survived in his presence.

Jaw tense, eyes fixed, arms held protectively tight around his charge, “Watch us” Dean replied steadily. Because if he surrendered to the doubt, the fear now—he’d be giving up on his brother…and Dean just didn’t know how to do that.

Very Nice.
anybody-out-there
2007-03-25 . chapter 1
Loved that episode, and obviously I'm not the only one:)

You have a beautiful way of describing our favorite brothers, and the events in "heart".
Izzy4
2007-03-24 . chapter 1
A lovely, emotional tag to one of the best Supernatural eps yet. Good job!
Freefall
2007-03-24 . chapter 1
Ahh great job!!
Faye Dartmouth
2007-03-24 . chapter 1
Aw, man, those two need to be coddled so badly. I worry for them so much. They've been through hell together and it never seems to get better. I really hope they make it.

Lovely piece :) Makes me want to cry, which means I really like it.
X5vale
2007-03-24 . chapter 1
*cries*


Sadly beautiful.

Thank you.
Dream Horizon
2007-03-24 . chapter 1
This has got to be my favourite Heart tag so far, beautifully written, full of emotion - my heart simply broke all over again. Thank you so much for sharing this.

Dream
Onari
2007-03-24 . chapter 1
God, I LOVED the final bit! I simply LOVED it! Great job. Thanks so much for sharing!! :D

xx
CyberSupernatural
2007-03-24 . chapter 1
Oh WOW!
I LOVED that!
-CS
pandora jazz
2007-03-24 . chapter 1
I've been reading the different tags and though I liked some of them, no one has written one like yours.
Your tag seems like a natural continuation of the episode.
I could picture Sam saying that they can't win and just see Dean's face as he says, "Watch us"
Perfect ending. 'Because if he surrendered to the doubt, the fear now-he'd be giving up on his brother... and Dean just didn't know how to do that.'
Thanks for sharing your story with us.
Take care.
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