 mousefiction 2009-10-23 . chapter 1That was great. I love tags to this episode. |
 supergirl3684 2007-07-01 . chapter 1beautiful!! |
 FBI Bones 2007-03-31 . chapter 1I've been wanting to watch Supernatural for ages and in February I found had them, so I watched up to 'Born under a Bad Sign' and then there wasn't any more, next day they had all been taken down ::sigh:: I've read summaries for 'Heart' so have a basic idea of what happened and can't wait until I can find somewhere where I can actually watch it (along with the other episodes I haven't seen) as I can't watch Supernatural on the TV for a couple of reasons.
I really liked this tag, it was well written and flowed nicely. It's really great to see you writing something other than SG1 (although I still love all of them) well done and thank you for posting!
~Red~ |
 PointOfView 2007-03-26 . chapter 1OMG! This is without a doubt the way the episode kept going. How did you know exactly how to finish it?!?!?! No joke! This is how the show would have progressed if the silly old programmers would get a clue and know I'd gladly watch an hour and ten minute episode of Supernatural... as happily as any Lost or Heroes fan eats up the extra few minutes they get in airtime.
I cannot believe how perfectly you captured this! Seriously, except for the fact that I pictured Dean going to Sam, this is the *exact* way I pictured the ep ending! I mean Sam stroking out and not breathing until Dean told him to is exactly what I had pictured... and you wrote it all out so beautifully and with such amazing feeling...
I AM ABSOLUTELY FREAKIN' AWESTRUCK!
THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU!
Please write more Supernatural fiction! You totally get this show and the characters and as a bonus you're a fantastic writer! AMAZING JOB!
PERFECTION! :-) |
 freaker 2007-03-25 . chapter 1good job. |
 TraSan 2007-03-25 . chapter 1Blasted site wouldn't let me review yesterday. I'm nothing if not persistent, so I'm back today. (c:
Excellent tag! That episode was heart-breaking enough, but these lines added to it...
Forehead pressed against the older man’s chest as they rocked, Sam confessed brokenly, “We’re not gonna to make it” Because nobody survived in his presence.
Jaw tense, eyes fixed, arms held protectively tight around his charge, “Watch us” Dean replied steadily. Because if he surrendered to the doubt, the fear now—he’d be giving up on his brother…and Dean just didn’t know how to do that.
Very Nice. |
 anybody-out-there 2007-03-25 . chapter 1Loved that episode, and obviously I'm not the only one:)
You have a beautiful way of describing our favorite brothers, and the events in "heart". |
 Izzy4 2007-03-24 . chapter 1A lovely, emotional tag to one of the best Supernatural eps yet. Good job! |
 Freefall 2007-03-24 . chapter 1 Ahh great job!! |
 Faye Dartmouth 2007-03-24 . chapter 1Aw, man, those two need to be coddled so badly. I worry for them so much. They've been through hell together and it never seems to get better. I really hope they make it.
Lovely piece :) Makes me want to cry, which means I really like it. |
 X5vale 2007-03-24 . chapter 1*cries*
Sadly beautiful.
Thank you. |
 Dream Horizon 2007-03-24 . chapter 1This has got to be my favourite Heart tag so far, beautifully written, full of emotion - my heart simply broke all over again. Thank you so much for sharing this.
Dream |
 Onari 2007-03-24 . chapter 1God, I LOVED the final bit! I simply LOVED it! Great job. Thanks so much for sharing!! :D
xx |
 CyberSupernatural 2007-03-24 . chapter 1Oh WOW!
I LOVED that!
-CS |
 pandora jazz 2007-03-24 . chapter 1I've been reading the different tags and though I liked some of them, no one has written one like yours.
Your tag seems like a natural continuation of the episode.
I could picture Sam saying that they can't win and just see Dean's face as he says, "Watch us"
Perfect ending. 'Because if he surrendered to the doubt, the fear now-he'd be giving up on his brother... and Dean just didn't know how to do that.'
Thanks for sharing your story with us.
Take care. |