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AussieUlrich
2009-10-14 . chapter 37
Crikey mate! You really had me a few times! It made me feel so bad when Netto died, I cried for real! I've read plenty of things like this but I never expected Netto to actually die, though I did expect that if he did he would come back as a Net Navi since Rockman did.

Really good story! I really enjoyed it!
generationalccwr
2009-07-20 . chapter 37
This is the very best story I have ever read... no, I am not kidding, and I've read a lot over my lifetime. Thank you so much for writing this story; it was absolutely amazing. If only I were better with the English language, I could fully give this fanfic the credit it deserves.
fezakyuu
2009-06-07 . chapter 37
Wo :)

I loved the story so much its was really awesome and really sweet all the way through.. well except for the battle areas.. lol yeah, anyways...

Bravo :)
black sun angel
2009-04-25 . chapter 1
great story
Achiasa
2009-04-16 . chapter 37
I'll be honest - this was really awesome and affecting and I wasn't expecting it to be. Possibly I'm prejudiced against deathfics, but in this case I admire the way you handled it without unnecessary melodrama, and I really liked the interwoven format.
Chesoris Kokoro
2009-04-12 . chapter 37
Great. I hav'ta say this is a great story, but I have one thing to critique you about.

Closure.

A epilogue is spos'ta provide closure to the reader, as well as tie -up anyloose ends that were left lying around, which there are plenty.

Here are a few people that could use some closure with:
The old gang, Especially Meriu. (Goes without saying, netnavi's as well)

Your OC, Botan (he's not even mentioned after Netto dies)

Forte (What happened to him?)


Honestly the story is top notch, but it lacks closure. The swaping back and forth between timelines is NEVER a good idea, but it really didn't ruin this.

Here's what i recommend to fix it:
First, split the story. Take the past timeline and put it in a separate story. This will help as in a technicality many people who read this will have a hard time understanding it.
Second, Revise the Epilogue to add closure for all the remaining loose ends.

Still Picturing Lightman and Rockman doing the fusion dance,

The Tower Romance
mrkrabbz44
2009-02-20 . chapter 18
woot forte!
eleonard4
2009-01-31 . chapter 37
This is a very awsome fic. Hope you get out another great fic. (^_^)
ChibiRyou200
2009-01-30 . chapter 37
Wow! I read this whole thing in less that two days! I'm not suprized , this is brilliant , it had me in tears so many times! Your and amazing author , one of the best out there!
Unique idea too! ^^
Symphonic Sweet
2009-01-29 . chapter 37
Although I'm sad that the story's finished, it was one heck of a ride, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. It was fun, and sad, and exciting, and the characters were wonderfully portrayed, and... and... bah, I could gush about it for hours. xD Easily the best Rockman.exe fanfic I've read. =D Thank-you for providing such an excellent story for us. =) (And I can't wait until your next story! ^.^)
Fudo Masaru-Daichi
2009-01-23 . chapter 37
God, that was awesome! And since I'm a girl, I have to tell you this: Netto's reaction to Laika and Enzan seeing him is so KAWAI! (Squeals) Don't tell anyone that I'm a girl,kay? I'm trying to disguise myself as a boy. And I dunno how you managed to NOT make Enzan OOC! I tried writing a fic about him once and in the end,I looked over it and OMG!

Great job!
Imagine.EXE
2009-01-16 . chapter 37
OMG...
Its been like what, a year since I've been following this fic?
But...but OMG ITS OVER! TT_TT But I really love your ending to it. I have nothing to say, I'm speechless.
There were times it made me happy, sad, and times where I cried a river. But I'll really miss this fic alot.
Awesome job! I can't wait to read your next piece! :D
Kawazoe Kazuma
2009-01-12 . chapter 37
yo...nice ending for a great story...
and sorry abt not reviewing for the past few chapters...been abit busy chasing the other writers on some fictions that hav been on hold for ages...
KonekoYoru
2009-01-11 . chapter 37
Best ending ever! *_*
Hikari Kita Natsuyaki
2009-01-10 . chapter 37
this story was so nice
i love it so much...
aw... i cant believe it
it's over T_T *cries*
wahh!
but i give you 9/10
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