wow. fantastic one-shot! great job!

That's just like Jack reflecting on his "mistakes" and "failures."

I liked that you went through all the things Jack could wish for, but the original does it for me. I melt everytime I think about that scene.

Thanks for writing this.

that was excellent! i'm sure that all those things that you listed jack wished that he hadn't/had done. here is my favourite:

Jack wished that he could have spent more time with Kate. If only he had told her how he felt sooner, if only he had let the other survivors take care of themselves more, maybe Kate wouldn’t have been in Sawyer’s arms that night. - classic.