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StarfireGreencoon
2009-06-29 . chapter 2
Your quote is is partially right. it should read,

“No one here is exactly what he appears.” Ambasidor J'kar, Babylon 5, Pilot, & Season 5 Intro.
anon
2009-03-01 . chapter 9
its a good story you have going here. i especially like the idea of using computer code to create magic. its an intresting story line with good characters i hope you update soon
Narsil
2008-11-29 . chapter 9
Read everything you have to date, and darn it, I've had to add another story to the list I hope you go back to when you finish The Return! This one is especially unique (though you can say that about pretty much every story on your list).
FohkuKohgeki
2008-09-09 . chapter 9
Will this ever be updated? (I'd really like it if it was...)
Progos
2008-04-21 . chapter 9
This is awesome. I bow to your utter superiority.
Chinangel
2008-01-21 . chapter 9
OH I HOPE that this fic is continued. but alas, it seems that it has fallen to the wayside. T.T
Alex Ultra
2007-12-19 . chapter 9
Mwe!! ^_^ Me likey. Make more please? =D?

It's getting hard to choose which one of your stories I like best. :( Even The Return I remember reading years ago, the only reason I'm not up on it is because it was so long ago that I've lost my place, and starting in the middle with no clue what's going on doesn't sit well with me. >.> I might catch up there eventually, but honestly I'm liking your fairies better than demons. XD Fairies are cool, if for no other reason than the surreality they represent.

Heh, so what's next? =D?

Alex Ultra: Fartar Sauce
LATER
Sancria
2007-12-04 . chapter 9
You know, at first I wasn't sure if I liked the way this story was unfolding, but after a while, I started to grow to like it. Very nice job, the plot is whacked, the interactions between the chars are great, espcially Dan and his girlfriend.

A bit wacky but fun.

One more thing: You need more professional help then I can afford if your mind comes up with dialogue like Dan's easily :)
Baughn
2007-08-01 . chapter 9
It must have been a very long time since last I saw this story, since there were new chapters. A lot of new chapters. I saw it, and it was good.

Joking aside, are you planning to continue the story? It's been two years since this chapter was released, now..
Vilkath
2007-06-24 . chapter 2
Not bad so far but a slight logic error imo, or Ranma's new family is just plain mean. If you can force lame templets on people so easily, you would thought they either give Ranma some form of protection, warning or let him pick one out before going out into the open public. I mean come on he can fly but has a short skirt, can't run because of high heals let alone kick. All in all it's a great plot for a story, a goal for Ranma to achieve, but really illogical and cruel. I know Ranma never has any real control in his life, but stuck in a girly Magic girl outfit. To top it all off, his new 'family' seems anything but sympethic, more like their turning him into a girl as muc has the hacker was. None even try to understand the emotional troubles changing sex might have and seem to push him into girly situations.
Rose1948
2007-05-29 . chapter 9
Another very enjoyable read. Looking forward to more when you get a chance to update.
Rogue7
2007-02-19 . chapter 9
I've just re-read this story, it's great, I can't believe I missed two chapters last time. i hope you are continuing to work on this, even if it's slowly; it's too good to abandon.

In hope...
rogue7
mikek3332002
2006-12-21 . chapter 9
good story. Like the orginal twist to the magic system. You wrapped up the first plot line nicely, though I got a little lost while reading the middle.
Adeptis
2006-11-19 . chapter 9
Great story so far =D cant wait to see how it progresses
Blackdex
2006-08-08 . chapter 9
Hm, well, I think you could do with a little bit more organization and a little linier development, but otherwise it was a great fic. Great characters, and one of the most imaginative Original Universes I have seen, even though you apparently cant come up with names. I do hope to see more soon. Ciao
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