Minor note about Washington state law: It's doubtful that the prosecutor would get a conviction of people resisting a wrong-door SWAT raid. Washington has very strong laws regarding the right to self-defense, as well as very strong laws regarding the right to fight off a home invasion.

It's the warrant, issued by a judge, that changes a home invasion robbery into a legitimate police action, and warrants MUST be specific about who they are looking for and what they are looking for and where they are looking. An inaccurate warrant is an invalid warrant.

An error on a computer printout does not make an inaccurate warrant valid.

Yeah, attacking tourists who happen to be school girls would look bad, and the odds of a successful conviction are slim and none. So it's not terribly surprising the prosecutor wouldn't pursue charges. And if the Nerima contingent refused the order to leave town, there's not a lot the prosecutor could do to force them. Legally, anyway.

i love this story you did a great job writing this story

I like this take for a non-SM Fuku fic. It is interesting and I have enjoyed the story. It is too bad that it has been so long sense the last update, be nice to see one again so we can see what happens next.

The only other non-SM Fuku fic I have really liked is Paragon by Kenko (and it too is not finished...)

Please update this soon.

This is one strange and fun story. I hope you continue it someday.

That's so damn good and funny!

please, update!

Your quote is is partially right. it should read,

“No one here is exactly what he appears.” Ambasidor J'kar, Babylon 5, Pilot, & Season 5 Intro.

its a good story you have going here. i especially like the idea of using computer code to create magic. its an intresting story line with good characters i hope you update soon

Read everything you have to date, and darn it, I've had to add another story to the list I hope you go back to when you finish The Return! This one is especially unique (though you can say that about pretty much every story on your list).

Will this ever be updated? (I'd really like it if it was...)

This is awesome. I bow to your utter superiority.

OH I HOPE that this fic is continued. but alas, it seems that it has fallen to the wayside. T.T

Mwe! _ Me likey. Make more please? D?

It's getting hard to choose which one of your stories I like best. :( Even The Return I remember reading years ago, the only reason I'm not up on it is because it was so long ago that I've lost my place, and starting in the middle with no clue what's going on doesn't sit well with me. . I might catch up there eventually, but honestly I'm liking your fairies better than demons. XD Fairies are cool, if for no other reason than the surreality they represent.

Heh, so what's next? D?

Alex Ultra: Fartar Sauce

LATER

You know, at first I wasn't sure if I liked the way this story was unfolding, but after a while, I started to grow to like it. Very nice job, the plot is whacked, the interactions between the chars are great, espcially Dan and his girlfriend.

A bit wacky but fun.

One more thing: You need more professional help then I can afford if your mind comes up with dialogue like Dan's easily :)

It must have been a very long time since last I saw this story, since there were new chapters. A lot of new chapters. I saw it, and it was good.

Joking aside, are you planning to continue the story? It's been two years since this chapter was released, now..

Not bad so far but a slight logic error imo, or Ranma's new family is just plain mean. If you can force lame templets on people so easily, you would thought they either give Ranma some form of protection, warning or let him pick one out before going out into the open public. I mean come on he can fly but has a short skirt, can't run because of high heals let alone kick. All in all it's a great plot for a story, a goal for Ranma to achieve, but really illogical and cruel. I know Ranma never has any real control in his life, but stuck in a girly Magic girl outfit. To top it all off, his new 'family' seems anything but sympethic, more like their turning him into a girl as muc has the hacker was. None even try to understand the emotional troubles changing sex might have and seem to push him into girly situations.