hey this is great kep up the good work, my friend as this game and i think its a great spin off from it, i love the personalitys in each caracters exspesilly yami and his relation ship wiht yugi i love it plz update soon love the detail

Oh my...somehow i knew this was coming...good luck with the next one!

Interesting story...but there's this one problem.

If you're going to use Japanese names...maybe you should use Jounouchi instead of Joey.

I love your character interactions here. perhaps because they so hark back to Evidence of Shadows, or soemthing. I can certainly tell where your ficcing origins lie.

I particuarly liked the way the ending so subtly dropped in the happenstance action without chucking it on us like a pile of bricks the way my own fic tends to. The only issue I have is that the chapters do feel a little long, but perhaps that's merely my own taste. I especially liked your Seto Kaiba. ou do him a great deal of justice.

Either way I hope to see more of this very soon.

As always, the calm before the storm. Beautifully written, admiringly plotted. I envy you so...excited for the next chapter, as always.

Interesting chapter.

Ah, now THIS is a happy find. As a non-gameboy owner I never got the chance to play falsebound kingdom so it’s great to see this done – and done so WELL. It’s lovely, detailed and well in character. The idea of mingling dreams between them is kinda cool.

I thought your name was familiar, and I was glad to find you’re also the guy who wrote “Evidence of Shadows” two or so years ago, the CSI crossover? (Should’ve faved you then, really). I remember you pretty much restored my faith in crossovers, and not you’re apparently about to restore my faith in exact-copies-of-games based fanfic. I’m excited to see what you turn out next. Hope to see an update soon ^_^

Omoshiroi...I am definitely reading the next chapter. Hope it's soon!