Oh, you are way too good at this. This is far more enjoyable than playing through the game (I've yet to beat it). If you ever choose to continue this, I'll be reading.

hey this is great kep up the good work, my friend as this game and i think its a great spin off from it, i love the personalitys in each caracters exspesilly yami and his relation ship wiht yugi i love it plz update soon love the detail

Oh my...somehow i knew this was coming...good luck with the next one!

Interesting story...but there's this one problem.

If you're going to use Japanese names...maybe you should use Jounouchi instead of Joey.

I love your character interactions here. perhaps because they so hark back to Evidence of Shadows, or soemthing. I can certainly tell where your ficcing origins lie.

I particuarly liked the way the ending so subtly dropped in the happenstance action without chucking it on us like a pile of bricks the way my own fic tends to. The only issue I have is that the chapters do feel a little long, but perhaps that's merely my own taste. I especially liked your Seto Kaiba. ou do him a great deal of justice.

Either way I hope to see more of this very soon.

As always, the calm before the storm. Beautifully written, admiringly plotted. I envy you so...excited for the next chapter, as always.

Interesting chapter.

Ah, now THIS is a happy find. As a non-gameboy owner I never got the chance to play falsebound kingdom so it’s great to see this done – and done so WELL. It’s lovely, detailed and well in character. The idea of mingling dreams between them is kinda cool.

I thought your name was familiar, and I was glad to find you’re also the guy who wrote “Evidence of Shadows” two or so years ago, the CSI crossover? (Should’ve faved you then, really). I remember you pretty much restored my faith in crossovers, and not you’re apparently about to restore my faith in exact-copies-of-games based fanfic. I’m excited to see what you turn out next. Hope to see an update soon _

Omoshiroi...I am definitely reading the next chapter. Hope it's soon!