I loved Roxas at the end of it :D
And the ending credits part made me laugh :D Good story :)

It's pretty funny when you imagine this as a cut scene for KH. The thing that bugged me quite a bit is that you kept spelling Paopu and Papou. It's PAOPU not Papou. And a bit of technical mistakes (punctuation, spelling etc.) But it was pretty good ^_^

Heh. To be honest, I like the stories with words and broad vocabularies, but this was good.

wow like the second chapter was ttly awsome just kidding it was okay

Dude...people go 'what the?' Anyway XD No disrespect...it's just funny!

lol that was funny escpecially the part about the tree! good job!

I don't know why this was so funny. I was mainly laughing about Riku hiding the cookies from Sora... I like cookies too ;_;. What kind of cookie was it?!O_o~ Do you like cookies?

Anyway, ch 1 is funny, great Kairi bashing... I cant stand that child...

I liked it alot. I thought the last comment with Sora and Riku was really funny.

why is this "M"?

It was pretty good, BTW.

oh i love all your stories there all so cute and funny as hell.

aw... that was cute! but you spelt werid wired but who cares!

AW! It's so cute! i'd like to see a story like this, it would be nice for the interesting change!

Aww cute but poor Roxas :(