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| Secretlypsychotic 2008-01-22 ch 5,  | abuseI do hope that this isn’t the end of this wonderful story, please do go on. I can hardly wait for the next chapter! I do wonder if Alice is REALLY going to come back now...course we’ll have to pick up the pieces with a sponge and pair of tweezers ;) |
| darkkfaery 2008-01-22 ch 5, | abuseo! You're so very brilliant! I LOVE IT! XD I can't wait to see what happens next! |
| darkkfaery 2007-12-05 ch 4, | abuseThis is addicting! You must finish, I say! It's beautiful! I love every word you write! ^_^ I should very hope to hear what happens next! |
| Gareth Paul Barsby 2007-08-16 ch 3, | abuseBeautifully chilling. The conversations between the Cat and the Hatter were well-done and you did a good job portraying the character's emotions. |
| Psyko SandWitch 2007-06-06 ch 3, | abuseAwesome so far, you have a few very minor grammatical errs but nothing to worry about. I just finished my English Exam so I'm on hyper grammar alert, so don't mind little SandWitch and her odd critiques. I am looking forward to an update, best of luck ^_^ ta ta! -P. SandWitch |
| KHQueeninLolita 2007-04-17 ch 3, | abuseWOW! This fanfic is amazing! I'm definately putting it in my favorites. :) Please write more! ~KHQueeninLolita |
| ChristinaDeath666 2007-04-14 ch 3, | abusewow, this is REALLY amazing. keep going :D |
| SkieLoon 2007-04-06 ch 3, | abuseCah-ree-py! I like that! Please continue writing your Alice stories! :D |
| Secretlypsychotic 2007-04-01 ch 3, | abuseHo, ho, ho! I’m happy that you did continue the story, it’s good so far. Even though I normally, I don’t like the stories that Alice dies in, this one is very good, I can’t wait to see what happens next! Keep going! :) |
| Secretlypsychotic 2007-03-25 ch 1, | abuseAll I can say is: “wow, what a good short story!” It’s wonderfully written, The Achiever here has already stated what I feel and what is true. Great! Keep going if you wish...but it’s perfect otherwise. |
| The Achiever 2007-03-25 ch 1, | abuseI love this! Not many can keep the dialogues believable and sustain the characters that the game invented. No, this stays true to the game, and the conversation seemed very well thought out. I do, indeed, hope you write more because this is very fantastic. The ending was sufficiently creepy and very well worded. You have a writing style which seems to be very calculated, and I found, as your reader, I was not brought of the story, instead, entirely engrossed. It's great to see there are some of us keeping Wonderland alive, thank you for posting. |