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OceanFae
2009-06-14 . chapter 1
After much thought and consideration, I have decided that Larxene and Marly are definatly doing it. THIS STORY WAS AWSOME!
LittleRedRidingHoodie
2009-05-14 . chapter 1
I laughed, then I laughed until I cried, then I laughed until I quite literally had an athsma attack and fainted. Word to the wise, don't read this story while you have a cold and can't get enough air even when you AREN'T laughing yourself hysterical. In any case, this was humorous beyond belief. Congratulations, you actually made me laugh until I fainted. (o.O I'm not actually sure how proud you will be of that accomplishment...)

LittleRedRidingHoodie
NormalAddict
2009-03-17 . chapter 1
Fuck. That was funny.. Especially the metaphore with "fucking whatever brains that kid has left out of him". O you have the absolute right to be a review whore, though I'm not convinced of the fact that you are. Even so you're a great writer, even short fics like these amuse me. You have great insight in the characters and hell, this was just too funny.
Yukinojo14
2008-12-20 . chapter 1
You are awsome. You know that, right?
LadeeBliss
2008-11-22 . chapter 1
I /died/ laughing at this story. My /dog/ died laughing at this story! Marlene is a great pairing that shan't be fogotten! Also, the little bits of Zemyx, AkuRoku and XemSaï helped too! The Hag&Fag duo ROCK OUT!

...Er, yah.

I'm sorry but Larxene is not an 'opportuniy-grabber'. If I had seen any of those pairings, I woulda whipped out my phone a took some GREAT picutres. From ALL angles! AND THEN I WOULD HAVE EARNED A FORTUNE! -insert manic cackling here-

-Tasha
-Zemyx-LoveChild-
2008-11-02 . chapter 1
Fuck yes.
This pairing is one of my favorite. And I was cracking up the entire time I was reading this.
I really do think that this happens to Larxene since she is the only girl member(besides Xion... but no one knows about her)
10/5
blacksakura13
2008-07-26 . chapter 1
OMG! this was so funny i think i laughed my guts out!

okay, a new favorite pairing thanks to you!

P.S. the poor pillow!
chocolate-pillow
2008-04-16 . chapter 1
lmao! X] i loved it so friggin much! it was reeli funny
and made me smile at random points in the story. i like the way larxene and marluxia would interact... i am now a marlene fan!
DrMcCoyFTW
2008-03-16 . chapter 1
Excuse me one moment!

*Bows to the pure excelence*

Finally someone else who love MarLarx! You are officaly my newest hero! ^_^
kong is king.
2008-03-10 . chapter 1
Wel... this was definitely interesting, and I think it was pretty well written. But, isn't loud, public het sex one of the 40 super-st8 stages of the closet? Although I don't know who's coming out... I dearly hope it's both of them, so that Larxene could sleep with Namine (I call it Larxine) and Marluxia... could just stay the way he is. He's adorable like that.
axeleah
2008-02-29 . chapter 1
HAHAHAHAHAHA.

The idea of this was amazing, and for such a luffly pairing :D

You're so right. Marlene needs more love, and you did it perfectly!

-bows-

Just... brilliant.

Leah x
youkai chick supreme
2008-02-28 . chapter 1
i really, really like this pairing. and i found this to be very amusing. i love the line about axel being into pedophilia AND bondage. that one in particular made me giggle.
DucttapedCheshireCat
2008-02-26 . chapter 1
I'm SO gonna follow the Marlene-wave :D
I love this and I've never read anything about them earlier.
great work :D
Heavenly Peanut
2008-02-23 . chapter 1
I don't think my stomach will ever recover from laughing.

Kudos!
Strawi
2008-02-14 . chapter 1
I haven't played Chain of Memories, or even watched all the cutscenes, so the only image I have from Larxene and Marluxia is the one from fanfiction(where Larxene always is a sadistic bitch). This just changed the picture drastically. Wow. It's simply amazing. Even though I'm pretty sure Larxene doesn't cry. But anyway, many cheers for you, for writing this!! ^^
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