ok now im just being being greedy but that was one heck of a chapter lol

one- Lulu and Wakka are so cute

two- Paine and Baralai :) ...nuff said

three- Nooj is a player!

four- OMG! lol

... ok im done :)

Ack! You can't stop there! Please tell me you're gonna update this soon? PLEASE! I wana find out what happens! Update soon! :]

Sincerely,

Dragongirl323

I like it!

*gasp*Lucil? Nooj? ok,calm...down...well, anyways, i hope you update! i really am excited!*sorry for me freaking out there, it was...unexpected...*

nothing excited him more than playing with Shinra’s toys… except maybe his wife in a bikini.

hehe, wakka, that was good. made me laugh-y.

Now, the ending, sounded really smart, and like profressional. So, now Lucil is carrying Nooj's son/daughter/is?

THats rich.

I like your story.. but I don't get it... Nooj's with Lebanc... and Lucil?

Oh, Rottwood and everyone else in Bevelle who's pushing for Yuna and Baralai's marriage, is REALLY asking for it now. I say it's time for a full out rescue attempt of Nooj and Lucil, with their machina guns blazing and permanently take down anyone who tries to interfere with their love lives. Then YELL at Nooj for putting himself and Lucil in this position.

How long has Nooj been married to LeBlanc, and how far along is Lucil in her pregnancy, if she was pregnant before Nooj even married LeBlanc, it couldn't be considered adultery if they'd called off their 'relationship' before the vows were made, could it?

oo its taking a cool plot turn!

Aw so cute, the part with Lulu and Wakka was soo sweet I can imagine it clearly -

"and now nothing excited him more than playing with Shinra’s toys… except maybe his wife in a bikini."

that was so funny, Wakka is so cool, you really have to write a only Lukka fic, their so cute together. I know you have many fics of them but wqould you mind writing one more? Pretty Please? xDD anyways thats your decision, but keep up your great work.

LukkaLover

“Shut up, kitty-boy,” snapped Paine, “do you expect me to own any male clothes for you to change into?”

“What? You never had a guy stay over and leave something behind?”

Paine withdrew the hand she was leading him with and bonked him over the head, “you’re sick,” she informed him.

I loved that. Still writing this from school.!

Love you.

Whay MSN FF style!

Why havent i read this sooner? Oh i know that feeling of not knowing if you like someone! I HAVE to read on! hehe xx

the drama continues ahh i like it

o, another intense chapter

I wonder how Paine got the long hair this quick anyways I loved it.

Paine and Lai' finally confessed their feelings towards each other YAY :P

I'M looking forward ;)

LukkaLover