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| Reviews for Shades of Red |
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   mabidiso 10/4/12 . chapter 2Very vivid and easily imaged. |
| naash 6/14/10 . chapter 2 owh sasuke's first kiss. this fic i really like how they interact the romance is there yet not there. |
| naash 6/14/10 . chapter 1 :) its really good |
| tsukuYomi 5/14/09 . chapter 2 Nice. I likey :) You've updated once, can you do it again? ...Pretty PLEASE? |
| Dreaming101 11/16/08 . chapter 2 awws that was cute... this was really interesting, added to Redshift well! :D Dreaming101 |
| dybank 9/23/08 . chapter 2 He, it's good! I didn't read Redshift but it's still good without it! (: |
| ManaTatsumya n' Yue 10/28/07 . chapter 2 43. – Search The three men who looked are... I LOVE BOTH OF THESE STORYS BLOODY BRILLIANT |
| Neon Genesis 7/17/07 . chapter 2 Wow, I like this. Well done! |
| ButaLove 5/8/07 . chapter 2 I loved it! GO SASUTEN! |
| HJWG 5/2/07 . chapter 2 Scary, I'm NOT into SasuTen (SasuSaku OR Sasunobody) but you write very very well |
| Flower of youth 4/30/07 . chapter 2 Oh... Continue... Please... This is getting exciting |
| Lorelai 4/20/07 . chapter 2 What isn't there to love about this? I love the one sentence themes with a moment presented. And of course, SasukexTenten is just awesome. I like how it isn't romantic but there's definitely something there. Subtly is awesome! Thank you for writing! |
| naash 4/18/07 . chapter 2 wow... that was great. you do sasuten well. i mean really well. i like it a lot |
| Amatyultare256 4/10/07 . chapter 2 This is a very interesting and unique story idea-I like it! Especially as a companion piece to Redshift, which was all about the atmosphere, with almost no details, I think this kind of 'series of small moments' storytelling is very effective. While I like both chapters, I think I like the first chapter more. I think it's a good thing that the moments aren't 'linear' temporally (as in, going from the beginning of her captivity to the end), and aren't predictable. However, I liked how there seemed to be a theme in the first chapter moving from Tenten first feeling happy around Sasuke (by holding her own in a fight) to him becoming 'her world'. Okay, maybe I just made that up. Or maybe the second chapter has a theme that I just don't see. But, I thought I saw it in the first chapter and I don't in the second. Still, they're both excellent. Also, is there significance to your switches between past and present tense? It didn't bug me as much as it usually would, simply because of the segmented story-telling, but it did make me curious. _ |
| Areless 4/9/07 . chapter 2 this is cool, u should write more on this! |
