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| Sairalinde Inwe 2008-07-03 ch 1,  | abuseNo matter how good or how seasoned the shinobi, they are still human and that is a simple and undeniable fact... Good work with this one, poor Tenten...I can hardly imagine the kind of pain that came after this mission... Very well worded too; it flowed nicely and I could clearly see everything with the details. |
| Speckle Han 77 2008-05-26 ch 1, | abuseWhy? Why did she have to kill an innocent girl?!?! Anyway, awesome story! |
| Girl of Light Writer 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseAw, poor Tenten. I feel so bad for her. If I were a kunoichi I would probably stop doing missions after I had kids to take care of them. Tenten was just being a good ninja and that's what she got in return. Poor Tenten. |
| Fuzzyfezz 2007-09-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseooh interesting story idea i love this pairing and this was cool! Dont write me back jsut wanted to say awesome story! oh but i wish you would describe hikari or somethin! |
| 7nmelz 2007-07-25 ch 1, | abuseAh, I really enjoyed this, thank you! |
| Kimikimer 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuse*crying* that was awesome!! |
| TigerShinobi 2007-05-02 ch 1, | abuseSuch a good fanfic... A but of an ambigious ending makes it wonderful :) I must favorite this! |
| Explosive Linh-Linh 2007-03-31 ch 1, | abuseIt was so sad...but so good! |
| i-x3-shikamaru 2007-03-28 ch 1, | abusei loved the bridal style part :] and overall this was an amazing piece of writing (: |
| FaIRy PrInCeSS-17 2007-03-28 ch 1, | abusewowza. that was good. it sounds almost like it could be continued ;) hehe. it was interesting, it allowed you to understand what a shinobi actually has to do. |
| nothing but blue 2007-03-28 ch 1, | abusegood job! loved the plot. :D |
| inoshika 2007-03-27 ch 1, | abusei cried that was great writing and i felt emoitions while i read it only experienced writers can do that B] |
| Reiah 2007-03-26 ch 1, | abuseWow. I liked that alot. Really good story! Yay! Cookies! |
| ^.^ 2007-03-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked it alot. Good job :p |
| Akatsukilover2010 2007-03-25 ch 1, | abuseAw it sad but good |