This is a beautiful piece of work that you should be proud of. The darkness of the story told in the poem is captivating and I agree the last two lines are the most powerful as they give meaning to the poem.

"Because killing all these people,

Is a way of slowly killing myself."

Poor Phobos...*moment of silence*

I love it! Awesomely written! and dark. I like dark. *giggle* (And awesomely is a word. Because I said so! lol)

Good poem; write more please!
-celestial dragon rider

It is so sad but I love it anyway. It's really good. You have an awesome talent.

Wow. This is powerful stuff. The last two lines:

"Becuase killing all these people,
Is a way of slowly killing myself"

Are the words of a man in desperate need of love and attention.

This is great stuff..

Knight