...You are a literary artist.

ok i love it more...

I like it. Very nice *and hot* I especially liked the ending.

O that waas so good! Was it a dream! was it!! hehe that was really good! and evil! Poor roxy hehehe

I love it! This is EXACYTLY what I had in mind when I was making Marluxia tell the story and E.

Yup, plus fav. XD

Holy frickin crap! That was... ... ...Y'know, "..." is really the best way I can describe it. Still, faveworthy none the less.