Not bad.

Dated after the series events, as the New Reich name suggests.

So we have an Emperor, but no Yang Wen-li.

You are ambitious, trying to mix the grandeur of the space battles and the Harkonnen-like convoluted plots of LOGH with Ranma.

I honestly hope you succeed.

Grammar and spelling are good, and you don't have the annoying tendency to put all of the chapter in one huge paragraph. That makes reading easier.

Legend of Galactic Heroes is a great anime if you have time to watch all 200 or so episodes.

I watched it all a couple years ago but I dont recall the events of this fic as having any relation to it whatsoever. The chapters are so short and empty I have no idea where this is going.

It gets points for a unique crossover but there is no reason to bother reading this fic at this point.

Ok.. was something changed? I mean seems i have read the same 2 chapters for at least the third time.

Is this a crossover with something?

Hm? I have no idea what is going on, other than that they are in space somewhere... You should have made a much longer prologue, so that people would be interested in reading the rest.