wow, i've read this story like 3 times and i still love it every time! yaay! i think the second person works realy well because its one flowing dialogue, you know without breaks and speak and everything ^_^ !

i dont' think it's THAT unlikely. and when you're in love; the fact that someone's technically a minor doesn't always compute; he could still be a good and noble person.
~shrugs~ good fic. and sometimes it takes that much courage NOT to move on, and to honor the past and who you loved even though they're dead; as kakashi proves with his behavior in the anime. and you're not alone in liking this pairing. :)

Very well written - it has me in emotional shivers. Very, very sad, but really very sweet.

Cheers.

Whee! Great drabble, poor Kakashi... you really like to make him suffer.
You know, Yondaime (if he's really Naruto's father) could be bi... and decided that Kakashi was too young, or he was in denial... but Yon/Ka could still work, even if Naruto is the 4th's son...

so sad.
unrequited love and the fact that yondaime is going to die make this fic so beautifully sad.
I love this pairing not enough people write it

A nice fic, interestingly written and sweetly tragic.

I love the one by Gelfling, too ^^

great stuff! i really like how your writing sounds kinda like poetry too. see ya!

i like you're long winded drabblings. they're cute! ^^ verry nice one-sided kakayoun

Wow, I really liked it, twas something different. I've never even considered that pairing before. Very angsty and gripping.