AWESOME!! SO CUTE! LOVE THE PAIRING!

u are my fav...m pool sound good(perv-)...plis update soon ok...or i kiss u,ups...kill u i mean...

omg i just love your nejisasu stories!

In the pool! xD
Well... I'm really a perv. -.-'
It's an awesome story! :D
Can't wait for next chap.. ^^
And i loved the inner voices.. I just ruinated the inner narrators voice.. i kept my laugh in as my eyes went back up from looking a little forward in the text.. Stupid me. -.-'
KEEP ON THE GGOD WORK! *thumbs*

Great job keep writing
SasuNeji is such a cute couple.:)

hmm... The pool would be nice IF they don't care that others MIGHT see them and they like water. They could choose the privatest place, the house, if they don't like others having .01% of seeing them. How about the forest/training ground or something like that? And Naruto or Lee or some other dude finds them after they finished making out...

*squeal!

In the pool, without getting caught! Shyeah! X3
I loff teh 1nn3r vo1c3s! Sorry, I just wanted to try writing like that. It IS fun! XD
Keep going!

Great chapter and I say in the pool.

*Girlish Squeel!*

update, before i die, this is good, fast but good, your lucky, i rarely like fast joined pairings, but this is good XD keep up the good work ^.^


~Yazumi skulls

Good story, me like :]

I think the thought of them doing it in the pool is kinda hot...

aww ** in his **' house!

here is the thing i forgot in mesha's other review GO INNER VOICES! HAHAHAHAHA *thinking i am so a genius* (no your not) who are you (i am YOUR inner voice) really? *thinking this is going to be fun* wel mesha is reading your other stories while i am daling with mesha's inner voice

cool mesha thinks it is cute and um... i don't know what i was going to say ... now i remeber but i think it would sound better under your new chapter