Reviews for Yui's Revelation

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Cloud Dancer1014 2008-07-31 ch 14,	abuse-Hi, I've just recently found this story, and I thought it was pretty good. Are you planning on continuing it?
joshua alton 2008-05-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis was one of the first storys I read of evangelion. when your finished with it, write another story! see your writing in later books.
SithKnight-Galen 2008-05-25 ch 14,	abuseInteresting story. I went ahead and read everything that you have posted in about a two day span. I think the direction that you are taking things is very intriguing, but I am still curious to see where you are going to be going with a few things. It has been hinted a few times that Tabris was sympathetic to both the Lilium as well as Areal's plight, so does this possibly mean that Kaworu might come into play earlier, and might actually live for more than one scene this go-round? Who was the only other Angel that was sympathetic to Areal (as you mentioned there was a second one of Adam's Children besides Tabris that tried to help her out after her...violation). Also, is Yui going to confront Gendo in regards to Rei now that some things have begun to roll into that direction, and better yet, are the kids going to find out...I can just imagine the three chilren's reactions to that. So, is Toji still going to end up being slated as the fourth child as well?
Daetor 2008-05-23 ch 14,	abuseAs always, I'm not one for fancy words or complex advice (especially at 2 AM) but I can still say that you did a decent job and that it's been a while. This had the feel of a filer chapter while you set the scene for the bigger events. It's kinda funny that you made Shinji into an angel but you didn't really elaborate on it. Then again, you might be saving it for later, I certainly have no way of knowing. Poor Gendo, he learns only the hard way doesn't he? This chapter also felt short, after such a long absence this felt like a drop of water in the desert if you get the idea. So I hope that the next update either comes sooner or at least that it's longer. Anyway, good luck with all of your work and I'm looking forward to the next update. Read ya later.
animefan29 2008-05-22 ch 14,	abuseI guess this is Ok as a filler chapter.
bigguy1234 2008-04-20 ch 13,	abusevery good chapter keep the work up
Neferius 2008-04-20 ch 13,	abuseThis was a great chapter and though it is shorter, it's still long enough for most readers. Read ya Later.
Daetor 2008-04-20 ch 13,	abuseAh and the plot thickens (always wanted to say that...). Well, you're right, it is short compared to the others, but it could have been worse. I didn't see that one coming with Hikari, I honestly thought that you either killed her or had her kidnapped or something along the lines. I hope that you'll delve deeper in the "Shinji is an angel" part and give him unique abilities as one. There are limitless possibilities with something like that, so I'm sure you'll have something done. The idea of writing chapter in advance is a smart one, good idea with that one. That also makes any requests for the next chapter useless now doesn't it [chuckles at the thought]. Anyway, good luck with your work, all of it and I'm looking forward to the next chapter of this fic of yours. Read ya later.
bigguy1234 2008-03-24 ch 12,	abuseawesome can't wait to see what happens next keep up the work till then see ya
Daetor 2008-03-24 ch 12,	abuseAh, another good chapter, I really like this story since it does bring quite an interesting twist with Yui being Lilith and so on. though, that would make Rei into a full clone of Yui now wouldn't it? At any rate, I'd have to say that you've greatly improved your writing since those first few chapters. Also the plot is getting thicker by the minute. Let me guess, Hikari has been kidnaped by the same guys that wanted Asuka earlier right? What ever the answer, I can't wait for the next chapter. Good luck with your writing, no matter what you're planing.
animefan29 2008-03-24 ch 12,	abuseInteresting developments.
Neferius 2008-03-24 ch 12,	abuseWell I do hope Hikari's alright. Your not a heartless jerk that kills off cute and innocent little girls are you? I would hope not.(Cough)Guilt trip(Cough) So far so good. Just don't use too many cliffhangers now. They can be fun once in a while but if you start doing it a lot you may regret it. Read ya Later.
Neferius 2008-03-23 ch 11,	abuseI guess I'm a month late reading this chapter...oops. They always say 'better late then never'. Like you said, it can be hard to end chapters sometimes. Often I'll write something too short or too long. Yet another enjoyable chapter. It looks like a good amount of drama will play out in the next one. I'm looking forward to it. Read ya Later.
JEnathan 2008-02-21 ch 11,	abusei think i can guess who is on the phone. Love how the story is going. the pacing of the chapters is right on the money. Poor Toji
bigguy1234 2008-02-20 ch 11,	abuseawesome very good chapter keep up the work

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