This was a really good gem of a fic you wrote here. The atmosphere was so gentle and I liked the use of candles and lights for some reason. ^ ^

sad ending but cute story :)

What? So sad! Come on! She...died! Aw, so sad! :((

Wonderfully written! Loved it!

That was so sad, but beautifully written. It was just really, really gorgeous.

How can you make them fall in love and then mercilessly kill Lenali?! thats horrid although the story before that happened was wonderful. I think I might just cry because no one writes for LaviXLenali and keeps them alive!

Hello. I would like to translate this fanfic into the spanish language. I think is simply a beautiful look the form in which the characters understand each other. Would you let me the honor of giving permission? ñ.ñ

Holy shiznats. That was love.
RABIRINALI = SO CANON.

Mwuahahaha--
Anyhoo, you had some nice descriptions there, but I also caught a few cliches. I don't know if you mind cliches, but things like comparing silky hair to a waterfall that glows brighter than the mon sort of made me wince a bit. Other than that, I loved your choice of words. 'Contours of her face', 'flickering wax candle', 'sky so pallid', and so on so forth.

>:D

And the ending line made my heart drop.

MOU, SO SAD. DD':

You don't see a lot of RabiRinali. It's like everyone thinks the whole manga is yaoi. I'm a AllenRinali fan myself, but this fic was super cute.
This line especially:

'He watches as the light in her beautiful violet eyes flicker and fade away, just like the candles she loved so much.'

Nice,
CI