HI!
this was super super funny!
it made me laugh!
it was cute!
i really liked it!
ahahhahhah
ah...okie...i'm done with simple sentences...this was a nice one shot! you got your Main Objective across and it didn't sound forced! i thought the characters were pretty in character, and you didn't have any grammatical mistakes...cookies for you!
and the pairings...and the idea! it was all very fantastical. ^_^

Lol! This is so funny! Is there more to come?

lol! that's hilarious! nice job!

Haha, what a fun story!
Mm, 'inappropriate touching'... like cheating on your diet and attacking that slice of chocolate cake you've been eye-ing all day.
Simply delicious.

Ooh, Lenalee was the best in this fic. And a bit of Lavi is always awesome.
Fav ;)

Absolutely adorable. Lenalee is such a little troublemaker and I LOVE how Lavi's first thoughts about Lenalee are always, "I bet Komui doesn't know about those..." because that's just so true.

So cute. That's all I can think of. And I just found myself smiling so much as I was reading this. I loved your characterizations. So cute.

lol now im hungry...

Somehow...Linali getting influenced by Lavi is a very scary yet funny thing XD Love the pairings, by the way!

OMG! Funny!! I like the part where Allen falls down and stuff. ^w^