Loved it! You described Babet perfectly, he's exactly the way I imagined him with his slightly off aura and perfect teeth. I especially liked the whole take on the origin of Monty's name. It was very clever and made me smile! Thanks so much for posting this. It was a real treat to get to read the final chapter!

Where's the rest?!

Good god, but I love this. Utterly perfect, I would change nothing. I really love the way that you changed between years and mixed them up so that they weren't completely linear. You really did a splendid job!

Ouch. That really is going to hurt. But I'm glad you updated this! I'm curious to see how Lucille's er...death...will affect Georges and Marcel. And Marius, or anyone else who chances to hear.

Update!

This chapter is so cute, especially at the end. I love Charlotte's thoughts here--her suspicion turned to surprise was very good!

Dear me, Marcel is in for a time! I'm glad you updated this story. For a while, I thought you weren't going to anymore, but hey, good to see you! I like Marcel's bewilderment, but are you going to show more of his reaction to his father's death soon? Update, sil'vous plait...

Yeah, I like it. I thought it was a bit confusing, the jumping backwards and forewards in time, but it works well.

Update soon!

Beth

Hey! Intrigue, intrigue...me likey.

I like this! People fon't usually write about Marius' family, especially not his long-lost brother. Did people really say things like "Monsieur my father" back then? And if it were in French, that would be "Monsieur mon pere," right? I'm sorta learning bits of French at a time, but my pronunciation is atrocious. Especially because I'm taking Spanish in school, so I say things as though they are Spanish. Keep going with this; I'm very curious.

Ooh la la...this gets even more interesting. So how is Lucille going to attempt hiding? I want to know more!!

Ooh la la! This is interesting, please write more!

Oh! I like it, very much!!

Oh. My. God. Marius' half-brother? Squee. I want to see more of this!