AW! I WUV YOU FANFIC!

That was a very sweet tale. Your writing is excellent and concise. I'm embarrassed to admit that I teared up a little at the end. Thank you.

I'd love to read more should you ever be inspired.

WHOA! THIS IS AWESOME!

wah. PHOOEY!

methinks that could be continued. PLEASE CONTINUE! PLEASE PLEAS PLEASE! thats just too sad! sob sob!

i liked it.

This was excellent - I love short stories that are actually good and coherent and have spot-on characterization. besides that anything mildly JaneBran makes my day. I am a fan.

short. sweet.
i like it.
:)

Heh, I think it's brilliant, and so Will-ish. Poor guy. Totally expresses his feelings without getting all angsty like some other stories. It's great!