Yeah, Mr.Z by the by what's z stand for? I also have the perfect place Drakken's hideout it's in..oh would look at the ime gotta peel.

I would hazard a guess that Z is Zorpox, a clone of Ron that was converted to evil

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Hm, an interesting story so far. Good plot and everyone was perfectly in character. Two things though, your grammer is somewhat rough and needs to be worked on, two, Ron's final line where he almost curses at Erik feels a little out of character for him, Ron wouldn't say something like that, no matter who it was.

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