Sorry for not logging in. Hope you liked the beta'ed version :D I must say this chapter was still very god and wel written. Well done :)

Wow. Please hurry and write the next chapter.

Ok, I'll do it. I admit,. its an interesting story and I go for romance more than action and adventure but I'm looking forward to it. Pm me if you want me to beta you mkay?

Keep writing, oh Kami-sama please keep writing. i need to know what happens next.

hehe if you haven't guessed i like your story...

Contiune PLease!

Sincerely,

Bunny

Ooh, this is really cool so far! But its a little OOC for the entire vilage to forbid the Hokage to fight, I mean, they let the Third fight someone he had no chance of defeating.

Yupp, keep writing! Um, is it OK to request for longer chapters? Not that long, just longer than this one. 3 Please? Will be waiting for the next update!

'Should I keep writing this story?'

Ans.- yes! upload ASAP!

Like the story so far. You should keep it going. The only thing I have to say is to add more detail and thoughts.

Nice first chapter, a little on the short side but pretty good. Please update soon!

Ina-sama

Ok, this one's written better than "yoru", but I like the details in "yoru" better. Acia ("Chiyo")

Oh, very very interesting. I like the summary, and the first chapter seems really promising. Waiting for the next update!