OOeeh i loved it it was so powerfull and exiting :D

huh maybe too much hints at the first few chapters? why would she be nice to him if she know he is a basterd? very gripping work =]

continue please

hell aren't you going to continue its good you now

Your command of language is very strong! Besides, your vocabulary and grammar are pretty good too (I'm a sucker for those), and I like the way you manage to portray your characters. UPDATE SOON!

P.S: I had hoped that it would be an MR fic but this is darned good as well.

aw r u sure u'r not?? well hope u get this. poor riven that must suck. i'd throw a fit right there in the street and make ppl pay attention 2 me! lol well his moms a totaly bitch, so that sux 4 him...in the later chapters when hes all grewed up lol he should visit his sister n mom w Musa and be like 'Ha! I made something of my life!'

oh...poor Riven...*hugs little Riven* It'll be okay! You'll grow up to be a jerk loved by many a fangirl, and that stupid haircut won't seem so stupid. =D

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Andrea
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aww, I really feel sorry for our little Riven :(

I wondered though: how long are you going to continue this story? till he goes to Red Fountain? That would become a pretty long story!! Not that I'm forcing you to do that of course. You're the author ;)

Didn't see any grammar mistakes. I loved the way you described their journey and the town, I could almost feel the salt tickle my nose.

Well, actually, it did, I had to sneeze because of that. x33


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keep going I love it

Man, the general's stupid.

This is so weird. For some reason, I can't picture little Riven. Oh well. I love the story so far.

NO! RIVEN! NOT RIVEN! It's just so sad. ='( How could they be so mean to him? And it's going to get worse?! Oh wow... Poor Riven...
I guess it's kind of hard seeing Riven still so innocent/young/slightly naive. But reading all of this stuff that's happening to him...

YOU FINALLY UPDATED!
it was AWESOME!
But porr Riven T.T
i feel so bad for him in this fic.
- S H A Y x3

whoops, forgot to review... ^-^'
But man... how dark and twisted is she? Using her own son as a shield? Cheating on all of these men? How she's treating Riven? SHE'S EVIL I TELL YOU! EVIL!
Of course, you already know that, along with everyone else reading this story. ^^
What will happen to Ribbon? I mean... Riven ^^' Poor widdle Wibbon...

Poor Riven... :(

whoopers, Helen of Troy. She's not as prevalent a character in the Odyssey as she is in the Illiad, which I haven't read, but even in the Odyssey, she's like...well, not so much as slutty as you make Anaxandra out to be, but...I dunno, I can't explain it.

I apologize, I'm totally rambling. *sigh* Good chapter, update soon. =D

Xo
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Andrea
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you)