That chapter was very sad, espceially during the end. AIt was funny when X tried to kill Zero though

Wow. You've done it again. The characters here are once again full of life, you've described the action sequences wonderfully, the plot is enthralling, and the humor is rich. I loved your take on X's and Zero's first meeting. About the only thing I disliked was your take on Sigma. You did a great job writing him, and reading scenes that featured him was delightful, but I just have different views on his character. Still, this story was terrific. Thank you very much for writing and posting it on the internet.

Good god; Yeah you are a fic writting legend...interesting ways of introducing Vile and such.

Another great one! It was worth the time it took to read!

Red can't have zero! he's mine! anyway, i love this litle series you worked out, and i'm going to go read the next one.

Once again, Red Draco COMES THROUGH IN FLYING BLAZING COLORS OF THE COMET. although I'm surprised she didn't just separate these three sections into differing chapters...ANYWAY. Like I said before. It took me FOUR DAYS to slug through this. And when I was finished, it left me completely awestruck. A feeling of 'Good writers are too few and far between...AND I WANNA BE ONE OF THEM!' Yes, Red Draco influenced the beginning of my writing career, alongside Maelgrim and Jetmode. Amazing what power words have...Amazing how there are few who can wield them like Red Draco. Am I worshipping her? Perhaps. But I know a good story when I see one, and I see a good author just as fast. -Erico