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wulfgarfang
2007-09-27 . chapter 5
*growls* where's the next chapter?
wandering_warrior
2007-06-27 . chapter 5
Awesome chapter! Whats next for Claire? Also will Alexia ever find a way for the T-Veronica Virus to accept its host quicker? If she does, will she use it on Claire?? Please update soon!
Yoko Haku
2007-06-24 . chapter 5
Hey this story is really good so will you please contine on with this story? I really enjoyed reading all of those 5 chapters so when will there be another one coming up? If it's okay to ask really...? Okay then well see you and oh God Bless!!
Lexia
2007-06-10 . chapter 5
Wow this is a really wicked story, strange pairing but i find myself liking it and i just adore Claire, i found she was a little over dramatic in Veronica but it was overall a good game. You've done a good job and i'd love to see more ^^
Burningbridges
2007-06-09 . chapter 5
Awesome chapter. It really had me on the edge of my seat, all the way through - and it left me dying to find out what happens next!
You know, the funny thing is that I can relate to this story in an almost profound way. I actually have a lot in common with Claire, and Alexia is a lot like my grandmother was, but with the violence. No wonder we didn't get along very well in the end. The only thing is, I like Alexia a lot more than my grandmother, which might seem quite nasty of me, but she had such a ... caustic and disagreeable personality... It was amazing anyone could stand her, really.
Anyway, enough about that. I'm thoroughly looking forward to reading more. This story never ceases to excite me, because it makes me ask so many questions along the way, and when I get the answers it's like - well, the closest I can come to describing it in one word is "exhilarating". If Agatha Christie or Sir Arthur Conan Doyle had written an RE fan fic, I'm sure it would have been incredible, but the suspense and mystery would have fallen short of the caliber of this story. And I can assure you I'm not just saying that - I'm completely sincere.
I am addicted to this story, and I can safely say, you've earned yourself a dedicated fan.
Now, if you were to ever write a story this great about the characters from RE3, I'd have to hug you...
Demon Pyromaniac
2007-06-04 . chapter 5
That was such a great chapter. I love this story and I'm always looking foward to the next chapter. You are really good at giving vivid descriptions without getting too wordy; it's justlike a published book. You are really good at keeping everyone in-character too.
Burningbridges
2007-04-18 . chapter 4
That chapter was really freaky, yet seriously awesome! And even with two loud-mouthed jerks on the computers next to me yammering away and getting on my nerves, this chapter totally thrilled me, and I'm not just saying that. It had a sort of surreal eerieness to it that I absolutely love in literature, because it's not that easy to write that mood. I try, and it always ends up being humorous to someone - I guess humor is my thing.

In response to your response (I know that's bad English, but I couldn't resist writing it that way - it's so quirky), I know what you mean about the "good story" sorts of reviews. There are lots of people who love a story and barely comment on it at all. I have a reviewer like that, actually...
And on the subject of the name, I like to research everything to death. So I pick up some things here and there.

And to end this review, fantastic. This chapter was wonderful, and I'm looking forward to the next one.
Also, as a final thought, I believe that the best stories are the ones that write themselves. They're always the most original and unexpected.
Claire Burnside267
2007-04-09 . chapter 4
I like it, I like it! Keep going!
Burningbridges
2007-04-07 . chapter 3
First off, I want to say that you are a great writer. Your use of vocabulary is wonderful and this is written like a professional, something I don’t see very often.

Anyway, passing aside the formalities and all that, I really, really like this story. The descriptions are vivid, like I’m watching a movie in my mind (that sounded weird to me). The plot in itself is fantastic, if not a little scary – although scary things are always most memorable. And the suspense just keeps on building, which is awesome. I will definitely keep reading this, and reviewing.
And by the way, I like that you used Alexia’s original name as her alias. Very clever!

Brilliant, and very well written. You’ve got a great thing going here, and I’m looking forward to reading more. Please update soon. :)
wandering_warrior
2007-04-04 . chapter 3
0.0 whoa...didn't see that coming... ^^; Anyway great chapter!! I can't wait for your next update!
Claire Burnside267
2007-04-03 . chapter 3
Nice chapter. Claire being a second queen, that's interesting ^^ I like how it's going, keep it up!
Demon Pyromaniac
2007-04-02 . chapter 1
Alexia returning from the dead is an interesting plot line. Although, it would be annoying if that happened in the game and you had to fight again; it was hard enough to aim that linear launcher in the first place. I wonder if Claire is her equal...
wandering_warrior
2007-03-31 . chapter 2
Awesome fic so far! Really it rocks! What's next? What's next?! Please update soon!
MGR
2007-03-29 . chapter 1
Not bad at all a great story just try to seperate more of the
sentences next time it just makes it a little hard to focus.



Other than that I would say this is a grade A story.
Claire Burnside267
2007-03-28 . chapter 2
Nice story! I was afraid to never read it. kept saying that the story didn't exist o.O I like how it turns, good ideas. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Good work!
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