In this story, Harmony did not know what a draft was. But in Like Father, Like Son, she mentioned the draft was one of the negativities of the 60s.

Nixon actually doesn't become president until 1969. Was that a mistake done on Harmony's part? I think Nixon actually was the one who ended up repealing the draft.

Wow, so Toby's birthday is pretty close to both the Marty's. The speech was pretty cool too.

So Ray is one month younger than Marty? Douglas was born in August of '68, so isn't Hank married? But then again, it probably doesn't stop him from going after other girls.

Marty Jr and Sally seems a lot like Marty Sr and Lorraine in the first movie.

Do the two Martys have the same birthday?

Why would the cops arrest Marty for no draft card? he's only 17.

I read the original script for bttf 2, which I'm guessing is where you got the plot. My favorite part was when 1967 Doc said he took LSD. I was laughing for about ten minutes on that part.

I just remembered something. Since this IS 1968, wouldn't Lorraine be pregnant with Marty by now?

What does the line "You want it, You know you want it and you know you want me to give it to you." mean exactally and isn't that the same speech that Griff uses when he harassed Marlene McFly?

I take it that Muhammad Wilson was Goldie Wilson't father?

so any chance of running into a decendant of Douglas Needles in another story. by the way is this part of the Haven universe or not?

Nice i liked it

Interesting indeed. Keep up the story sounds interesting!