AJeff

I wasn't going to save a copy for my Pretender Library, but after reading your story...HAD TO ! Exceptional, well written, a change of plot, great writing ! Then, to top it off, you FINISHED it, and what a finish ! Thank You

God Bless

MsHolmes45

That's so sad ... *sniffs*

I'm going to read the sequel after my homework ...

THX so far

God bless you!

Thara

GOD, FOR A GENIUS HE'S AWFULLY DUMB! GONNA READ THE SEQUEL NEXT!

OH my God! I actually cried... and i JUST started reading Pretender fics, like a week ago. I Love It. So sad.

OH MAN!

You made my cry!

You broke her heart and mine!

GRR! Next time I won't read angst again! lol

But still great how you described it all! *sniff*

Hi AJeff,

This ending was so sad, but somewhat expected after all the rejections and betrayal Jarod had endured with MP. Beautifully done and looking forward to your next story.

Mercy

Hi AJeff,

Thank you for the kinds words. Glad that I could be of help!I love this story! It's about time that Jarod grew a "pair", (snicker). Sometimes I'm a J/MP shipper, sometimes I'm not! Can't wait for your next story to appear.

Charro

Hey!

Sorry just pooping out of my exam cave... i think i missed a few reviews in there.

I think the ending was very plausible. Poor J has been beaten down so many times.. eventually he would just give up. The ending was really beautiful! Well done :D

- K

What a chapter,so sad definately needed the tissues well written. As always Julie.

Has Jarod found somebody else or is he just pretending? I do hope so for Parkers sake,he's certainly making her squirm this forward to readin more as always Julie.

Wow great chapter!

I'm wondering what Jarod is up to!

Poor Parker, yeah she deservs a little of it but heck they are both so stubborn! :D

Can't wait to read more! :D

Hi AJeff,

Looks like this time J and MP will go their separate ways, but for how long? Very intense chapter with lots of emotion. Nicely done. Please continue.

Mercy

Hi Anna,

Bravo! I love this story. I have no pity for Parker! After what she told Jarod, "Turning points only come when you have something to turn to. It's just the way the damn story goes, Jarod." I hope that it's not going to be another sappy "And they lived happy ever after" story because I'm sick to death of them. Or for that matter ends where one dies and the other one grives forever more. However, as they say it is your story and the ending is up to you. I can't wait to see what will happen in the chapter five.

Charro

Well it definatley looks like Jarod means it this time,on to chapter 5 can't wait. As always Julie

Thanks for your kind words to me. This chapter is again very painful. What has happened to Jarod? Is he really remembering is very fearful of their being together? Or, is he afraid of something else - something that we are not yet aware of? This behavior is unlike both J and MP. Thanks - please post again soon for us.