-_- Geeze... way to write that first review yourself. Same lack of punctuation of your story and everything...

This has nothing to do with Broken Sky.

Morowolf,

i reay like the wrong way. you should consider lengthening it. Maybe makng it a full story? I like what is is now, but it would be really cool if you made it a full book.

Kya

wow absolutely love the start its so different how everything leads into another how the bloody hell did you think to write it like that im shocked well done was this a dream you had?