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Part-Time-Pyromaniac
2008-04-26 . chapter 3
Semi sad? Its really sad, because your a wonderful auther with a creative mind and a very entertaining writing style.

You shouldnt worry about with others think, because I can tell you right now, if you get flames, they are just pissed and jealous.

Ive never heard of your idea before, I mean, turning the bladers into fishes. You reviewed one of my stories, and I checked your profile out; thats how I found this story. This story really caught my attention, but im deffently going to check the others out. It may not be today or even tomorrow, but I will look at them.

On your profile you can see the amount of people who read your story. I bet that if you looked, you would see that alot of people are.

I know from personal experince a lot of them are just people who dont have an account, but love reading fanfictions, and probably dont know or understand the review system. And others are authors that are too lazy to sign in or review; some might not be able to sign in from difficulties.

I can see giving up a story because of no reviews, but retiring from the sight is something that I really hope you wont do. Even if you dont post stories up, you can still read others stories and review for them; you yourself should understand how good reviews make people feel. Besides, you can make really good friends on this sight, even if you never meet them in person, they still have the same interest and opinions as you do.

I personally, from this story alone, think that your a wonderful writer with great potential, even if it is just fanfictions and in your free time. Your grammer isnt PERFECT, but its good, and you get people drawn into the story, so unless the are just looking for mistakes, then they wont notice them.

Im gonna add you to my alert list, just incase you decide to stick around. ^.^ I really hope you do, too, and I hope you get insperation for this story as well.

Ja ne!

Pyro chan
KuyaRage
2007-11-07 . chapter 3
WHAT THE!(Next word is not vulgar okay?Actually this is what the heck is this story!?!?)
Well...You might think that this is...Don't know...Maybe somthing bad...But actually it isn't...WHAT THE!Here is let's just say this story is really funny!Specially Hilary!
Well...GL on you works...
blitzkreig50889
2007-11-05 . chapter 3
You better not retire from here yet! I might have some ideas for this fic here for you soon. Don't give up on things yet! People are jerks for not reviewing. You want me to message them and chew them out for not reviewing let me know! I'll be happy to help you out!
anonymous
2007-11-05 . chapter 3
update soon plz. don't stop the story
rebelmewpheonix
2007-11-05 . chapter 3
omg!i just found this and its funny!^^
plz don't quit the story i wanna read more^_^
update soon
blitzkreig50889
2007-09-25 . chapter 2
*tries to stop laughing but can't...finally regains breath after two hours* that was one hilarious fic! I can't wait to read more of it. *laughs again then stops* oh this one is so being faved!
WETWINZ
2007-05-09 . chapter 1
GREAT STORY!
Akaatje
2007-04-27 . chapter 2
PLease update this quit!
I really like this, I was laughing at the time!
Kuru-pastaxP
2007-04-09 . chapter 2
haha..
so, now they are fishes =D
Update, Update!!^^
IceWolf15
2007-04-06 . chapter 2
Really good.Waiting for update.
QDA
Vendetta-Rose
2007-03-31 . chapter 2
O.o
-falls off chair-
Well that was good. As in hysterical! The D-Boys getting changed + Hilary made me burst out laughing!
^_^
Vendetta-Rose
2007-03-27 . chapter 1
Fish? Hm... Well I can safetly say that has NEVER been done before!
-chuckles- I couldn't help but laugh when I thought of a Hilary fish moaning and moping around because she thinks she's fat.
Can't wait for the next chapter ^_^ Later!
Kuru-pastaxP
2007-03-27 . chapter 1
Haah'
good idea. ;d
Beywriter
2007-03-26 . chapter 1
i found this story by accident and i think its a great idea. but something fishy is going on in it somewhere

and i think the idea of Kai being a shark is really funny can't wait for more
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