How sad.

Z: OH MY GOSH! That was SO SO SO sad! I really really liked it! I LOVE Chadpay! It's really cute!

J: YO! THAT STORY WAS TIGHT, AIGHT? I MAY HAVE HIV, BUT I HAVE A BRAIN! I KNOW A GOOD STORY WHEN I SEE ONE!

Z&J: Great job, girl!

DUDE. I SHOULD'VE CHECKED OUT YOUR STORIES A LONG TIME AGO. BUT ALAS, HERE IS MY REVIEW! WO.

GAH.

THAT WAS AMAZING.

(:

OMG, OMG, OMG. GO CHADPAY!

Congrats, you've got me hooked on Chadpay again. (:

They're polar opposites, but together they somehow attract to make a really hot couple. If there wasn't Chaylor, CHADPAY ALL THE WAAYY. Plus, that way it lets Zeke and Kelsi be together. And we both know how amazing of a couple they are. (:. ZELSI!

Anyway. This is awesome! And you seriously should post more fanfics!

I wish you could expand it, though. it was sadicle. :( sniffle.

"You see, Gabriella and Troy aren’t with us anymore. They died in a car accident about a month after your Daddy and I got married.”

I dunno why but that kinda made me laugh when I thought about it in a different way. It's like something that you'd imagine in rp, except they come back to life as ghosts to haunt everyone. (:

but in the context of the story, tis very, very sad. :(

but it's soo sad. wah. died when eight months pregnant. :( aw. but it's cute how they named their children after them.

amazing job! (:

brishty

Hey, *luv luv* i love this story. you are like GREAT! all hale hira! muhahaha. sorry, right now, im high on sugar. you are like a drama queen. you are so good... i wanna cry. i wanna be like you. waha. love your story. i wish it was more then 1 chapter tho...

heya! awesome story, i must say! but so depressing :(...it's really sweet how u mention the 'gang'. and i'd have LOVED to read more! try to continue Hira! Make it longer...cuz let me tell you, YOURE GOOD! INFACT AN AWESOME AUTHOR! (one of my fav authors!:P) LOL! anyways..cya tomoro,

luv,

PJ

This was cute, but tragic too. You should write more Chadpays! But maybe not such a sad one, though I'm sure I'll read everything if it's Chadpay ;p Loved this