Strange and different.

This story sounds like it was written with the following process.

1. Throw Scooby-Doo cast in blender.

2. Throw in a few original characters.

3. Throw in incredibly weak plot.

4. Toss in tidbits of 'hip' lingo.

5. Throw in horrible spelling and grammar mistakes.

5. Maul the words together.

6. Tape them back together.

7. Pretend Velma actually talks so badly.

8. Cut out important words to sentences to leave reders guessing as to what you could possibly mean.

9. Act as if this could qualify as a 'groovy' fanfic.

The 'What if?' Pokemon story was forgivable, but this was simply terrible. Do you write this poorly on purpose? It's not even worth MSTing- It's too easy.

- Musachan, who wishes she hadn't read that.

It was okay, but didn't make a lot of sense. Good try, though... :)