Okay so it wasn't Cameron - shame I was hoping Sara would be able to kick her butt again :)

Will Cameron come back? Please? I want Sara to beat her up. Cameron was such a cow. Sorry, I never liked Cameron :)

I really love this story, I've spent the last week trying to get through it and still keep up with my school work. :)

I'm going to take a guess here, I don't really expect you to answer me, and I don't know if you've possibly written it in one of the later chapters, but is Cameron the female killer? Because she's always bugged me, how good and how nice she is. And then the eye witness said that they were both tall and lanks with brown hair. someone *cough*cameron*cough* fits that description, anyway, thought I'd guess before I possibly read it in one of the later chapters. update soon please. :)

I am glad that I found your story again. You do an amazing job with the triangle that has been devised in the family. I know that the boys are Sara's but I really do think that Sara and Nancy's relationship is a bit too close to be called over. And no matter how wrong it is to covet your sister's spouse I think Catherine deserves Sara to be fully invested. I just think Sara needs to realize that she is the one that leaves Catherine twisting and Catherine needs to decide whether it is all worth it in the end. I look forward to seeing how you weave the ladies together.

Another great update as always.

Poor Cath, she's in a complicated situation. I can understand that she wants a future with Sara and that may not happen while Sara's still attached to Nancy (even if she's not in love with Nancy, they still have a connection that might never end) so I can't really blame Cath.

If Catherine is feeling like this about the situation, I wonder how Sara must feel.

Thank you for this update, it made my day! Can't wait for the next one. I have faith in you!

Oh, dont you dare to put them on roller coaster again! :D

I want them to be happy as ever... and together.

Going great, keep up the same pace.

Argh... tension, tension, tension... that you write so well.

I have faith don't worry. :-)

Thanks!

It's been really long since the last time I reviewed this story, this amazing story.

You don't really write simple stories, that's for sure, and with all that has happened...buf...words are failing me. But I'm going to try to centre on this chapter.

Relief is what we can find at the very first of this chapter, but then we can only frown at Catherine's reaction and her leaving the hospital in momments of needing for Sara. Yes, she was there before Nancy arrives, but after that, she leaves. Jelaousy maybe? Well you said yourself 'I feel like and intruder in my own family'. She's aware that the connection between Sara and Nancy is stronger that she thought. I can only understand how Catherine feels, and even share it.

About Sara's reaction to what Catherine says to her...That almost sounded as an ultimatum. To choose between the one you are with or to choose between your family. Sara is a parent, not biological, but yes legally. Does it make different as a mother? Does it mean that if she didn't gave birth to those kids, she has no right to love them as much as they were hers?

She admits her attitude is petty, is selfish. She was the one who left the hospital, she's the one avoiding any contact with Sara. In this case, she is acting as a coward not wanting to comfront the fact that Sara has a real part on her sister's family, and she's hurt because she doesn't have that, because she doesn't know if Sara is committed with her the same way she was with Nancy and the fact that she uses her anger toward Sara or towards Nancy, shows it. Using Grant with her sister, with anger, because she can't deal with the hurt of not been able to see if Sara loves her or not, at least not anymore. That's what she confess to her sister in an outburst 'I want her to love me,(...)I need her to love me. Because I love her and I need to know that she loves me back,(...)Can you tell me that she loves me? Can you?'.

There it is! There is what she always wanted, what all of us wanted, to be loved the same way as we loved the other person. But everybody know that love, is something tricky. Not always we have what we wanted. We can give a lot to the person we love, but what we received is something different. In some cases is too much, in other we need more.

I found interesting the answer that Nancy gives to her sister after all the questions about what Sara does with her. If she surprises, if she takes care of Lindsey, etc. 'You have exactly what I had! And for some unknown reason you’re trying to find every reason to make this difficult. Maybe you should start enjoying what you have and actually give it a chance and time to work out.' That was what Catherine thought at first when she was with Cameron. Resignation. Maybe those words weren't mean to be for Catherine's reasure, but more to Nancy. She is resigned to accept that she doesn't have that anymore. Yeah, in some way she has, but not with the same intensity she had it once.

Maybe your Mojo is moping around, maybe you are not at your best, but there are a lot of things I see in this chapter and the ones before (or maybe I want to see too much than already is), and I can only say...keep going because you have a gift writing.

love it! this is my favorite story of all stories. really. the emotion in your writing is addictive, i love it. update soon!

oh cath is so conflicted :( well go on n apologize n make up and then proceed 2 make out w/ ur fav brunette :)

Thank you God! I needed a fic fix so badly and I was just to about to go read something old when I got this. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Well, not thank you for adding more angst to my already dramatic life, but thank you fro distracting me from my life. THis was great, keep it up!

LOVED it! Thanks for accepting anon comments! I always want to comment on all of these wonderful stories, but can't because people don't accept anon! Boo!

This story is great and I've loved following it. Thanks for the update! :D

oh my...

That was intense..

I can see the petty side to it, but I can also really feel for Cath and how she sees/feels that way she does.

Yikes..

Can't wait to see how you get it all to unfold :D

More soon please! and thanks!

*hugs*

Great work! I hope you find your mojo. Good luck and keep it up.

I have a question...and it's been bothering me for some time now. Who fathered the boys? Do they have the same father? Is he going to show up now that one of them is in the hospital? What was his take on Sara having some legal rights over his boys?

Just curious...

Oh! I liked that chapter... but isn't that the way it always goes? You're about to have sex or you're in the midst of a heavy make out session, in the midst of sex and you're interrupted... it's no fun! But at least it was an emergency...

I can't wait for the next chapter! :-D