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| mmelon3 2008-05-10 ch 3,  | abuseomg! not greg!! great chapter, can't wait for the next one? |
| Sawyer Fan 2008-04-11 ch 3, | abuseI'm really liking this story, and hope you update soon! I do have two issues... 1) Your chapters are too short. I'm greedy when it comes to a story I like a lot, and I want more... 2) In chapter 2, Greg is tied to a bed, but in this chapter, he's tied to a chair. You might want to fix the 'bed' thing in chapter two. I think the chair idea was better, and gave Greg the opportunity for escape. Other than than those two things, I'm really enjoying the read! |
| Evil Genius of the COCA 2008-04-07 ch 3, | abuseUh oh... And now Greg is unconscious (I have no idea if I spelled that right...) and will wake up with a pounding headache, and probably a good sized bruise...And somehow I have a feeling that i's gonna get much much worse... goash, now you really gotta update, cuz this just makes me want more! Write more soon pleease?!?! ~EG~ |
| GregsLabrat 2008-04-05 ch 3, | abuseMan, I want to rip Matthew to shreds. LET ME AT HIM! Anyway, looking forward to more. |
| miki-miki-omo 2008-04-03 ch 3, | abusegah! poor greggy! this is really good though, the only possible complaint i have would be that the ch. are a bit too short for my tastes! i e- i want more! can't wait for the next ch.! please please PLEASE update soon! |
| Manavie 2008-04-03 ch 3, | abuseWow glad to see you back...It's been a while I read a good Greg story here :) hope you'll update soon :D Great job!! |
| sasukesmyemo394 2008-04-02 ch 3, | abusemore!! ...please? ^^ |
| bumble-beeoncrack 2008-04-02 ch 3, | abuseOH NO! DUH duh DUN! can't wait to find out what happens next! update soon!! please! |
| darkangel1992 2008-04-01 ch 3, | abusepoor greggo love your story :D |
| SilverHowler 2008-03-05 ch 2, | abuseOoh, come on, update soon, please? *makes super-adorable puppy eyes* It´s soo good...wanna know what happens next! Work work! XD |
| leetvfan 2008-02-04 ch 2, | abuseIt's really great. Hope, you'll continue |
| sandersfox 2008-01-04 ch 2, | abuse=] i'm so excited! |
| sandersfox 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abusehm...good so far! =] i love it when greg gets kiddnapped, he is cute! keep up the good work. |
| darkangel1992 2008-01-03 ch 2, | abusepoor Greggo UPDATE SOON PLEASE |
| Evil Genius of the COCA 2007-11-25 ch 2, | abuseAw man...if this is going where I think this is going...(shivers) Greg is in a hell of a lot of trouble... hope the team finds him before it's too late... Please update soon? Signed, EG |