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Reviews for: Little White Ones
Hermowninny
2009-10-24 . chapter 1
Loved it! Trying to find more words to describe why I like it so much and failing... I just do.
AngelicKat445
2009-08-09 . chapter 1
Oh, I love that! It's beautiful! It made me want to cry at the end, where she says "Do you fancy her?" And he says "Yes."
It's beautiful!
Lirazel
2007-07-23 . chapter 1
I love this. The execution is just great, as is the characterization. All those little lies leading up to him telling the truth about the one thing that matters--brilliant.
vreales
2007-07-12 . chapter 1
wasn't hermy there? u should write a sequel to their reaction, something like with lavender screaming i hate u, and hermy gasping and saying that he only did it to get rid of lavender. then they act like nothing happened, that's why they were so embaressed the next day when the grabbed hands and all. gosh, i just ramble, don't i? that's long enuff 4 now.
VrEaLeS
PS ur story was really good!
Dudette13
2007-04-30 . chapter 1
That was so sweet! *adds to faves*
you're my Star
2007-04-26 . chapter 1
I like it a lot, it was quite adorable. The little snippets of conversation between Ron and Lavender were quite amusing, especially:

“Would your cuts feel better if I kissed them?” “Yeah, I think so.” / “What was Hermione Granger so upset about, anyway?” “No idea.”

those to exchanges. And, of course, where Ron declared he fancied Hermione. Brilliant work. :]
ronhermione4eva2314
2007-04-26 . chapter 1
wow... i liked it alot! beautifully written, really. keep it up!
*adds to favourites*
God Bless!:)
-*~ronhermione4eva2314~*-
Silver Weasley
2007-04-19 . chapter 1
Ah, a nice refreshing does of R/Hr. Very well-written; I liked how Ron admitted it to Lavender in the end that he fancied Hermione, and also that he felt guilty.

Great story.
Gigglegirl13
2007-04-14 . chapter 1
I totally see this as what happened between Ron and Lavender. I didn't think he ever really liked her anyways. I liked it, it was pretty in character.
Owl of the Night
2007-04-01 . chapter 1
Oh... that was so sweet! The ending was perfect!! one the the first times that he told the truth to Lavender. Really good!
Druidess Sieya
2007-03-31 . chapter 1
wow. you know, i think this hits ron on the spot. a bit insensitive but well-meaning; the ending was great, as well as the little glimpses into their relationship that everyone likes to make fun of.

GREAT characterizations, really; we don't get enough of that these days. =)
TheFabMax
2007-03-28 . chapter 1
aw... lol. poor lavendar. she cant hold a candle to hermione... good story!
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