Squee. I love Wanda/John and you did an awesome job.

(I have a X-men Evo RP site in my profile if you wanna check it out too).

hehe... very good!

Not too bad at all. Good fanon references (who doesn't read Goldylokz anyway?) and good personification. Would offer concrit but I'm too tired and lazy. You're good though.

I think you should continue this. Not nice to leave people hanging.

How can anyone be a Gambit hater? That's what I want to know! I think that should be considered a freakin' crime! Gah! The audacity of some people ;)

Anyhow, lol, I liked this. It was cute and it was different. I think a lot of the times most people just use other people's idea of what Jonda is/could be, and I think I like the ones that add their own spice of originality to it, and I think that its safe to say that yours is one of those :)

If I had my say, I would tell you to continue (I wanna know if she says yes or not!) But then again this was technically a one shot. But one could hope, right? ;) Good work!

Kristen

I guess by now you know you should update. It was cute and realistic (the conversations, I mean) and I laughed out loud about the random Etch-a-Sketch ^_^

I loved it! You should definitely continue. :)

I'd honestly like it if you continued the story. You have a lot of great potential here. What really peaked my interest was the "gypsies" comment about Magneto. What's he up to anyway?

Loved the dynamic between the boys and the actual Jonda conversation.

Spent a little too much time on Victor. Because of that, I thought he might have had a bigger part later, but he didn't. All we really needed to know for this shot was that he owned the coffee shop, liked mutants, possibly one himself, and was hot but taken. His suspected powers didn't need to be mentioned unless they played a part later.

Other than that, it was fun and funny. This goes in the C2!

I really liked this. It was really funny.

Loved it, hope ya do update, you could even bring rogue and remy into it - they could even double date! :O lol, cant wait to read more x