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| Thornwitch 2008-07-24 ch 17, anon. | abuseY'know, your heroine seems a lot younger than someone in their twenties. She reads like a not-very-sophisticated 17 year old, not an adult woman. Your Willie Wonka seems pretty spot on, though. |
| KeLpIeenoch 2008-07-17 ch 17,  | abusegreat story!! i loved it, it's so right the way you twisted it so that Charlie is a she! i hope you update soon! |
| Superdani 2008-07-13 ch 17, | abuseOMGOMGOMG!! AWESOME! THANK YOU! |
| Superdani 2008-07-13 ch 16, | abuseamazing!I just loved what happened to her family! |
| Superdani 2008-07-13 ch 15, | abusehaha funny grandma. |
| Superdani 2008-07-13 ch 14, | abuseI know I'll dream with this story! |
| Superdani 2008-07-13 ch 13, | abuseTHAT WAS AMAZING! THIS IS THE BEST Chocolate Factory STORY I'VE EVER READ! |
| Superdani 2008-07-13 ch 10, | abuseAWESOME! Let's boogie was the best line! Loving this story! |
| Superdani 2008-07-13 ch 9, | abuseOMG!I'M SO IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!! IT' S AMAZING! |
| Ge the Turk 2008-07-12 ch 17, | abuseHey! That's great! There's not many chapter with songs in it that I like. I usually like... skip them (like ar not again). The most funny part in that, is even if I don't really like to read that type of chapter, I do write them too anyway (not very logical... I know, ahah). Well, all this to say that I really did enjoy reading this one! It was well presented and useful for the advancing of the story!! I really like this fic, keep going! :D |
| XxSupernatural.lovexX 2008-07-04 ch 17, | abuseI love this story it is just too cute! I love the last chapter with the oompa lumpa singing the song form the little mermaid! I can't wait to see what hapens next! |
| keymasters 2008-07-02 ch 17, | abuseYay! You updated XD! Wonderful as always very fluffy BTW, XD good job! ~Sierra |
| TBooki 2008-07-02 ch 17, | abusehaha! Very good! I love it and like you said finally! TBooki |
| Lady Rikkunen 2008-06-30 ch 17, anon. | abuseAGASHSHAS! That's so cute! Can't wait to next chapter! |
| Snuffles-sweetie 2008-06-30 ch 17, | abuseoh yay! lovelyy...the finally kissed...and the song thing...amazing :) but...how come charlene didnt here it? weird...oh well...luved it! |