|Reviews for Fine Eyes|
| bananafox 1/12/13 . chapter 1
a very nice fic :)
| shieldmaiden19 11/3/12 . chapter 1
It's very rare to find a fanfic that is so...attune to Jane Austen's world. I enjoyed this story quite a lot. Besides, who doesn't like to see Mr. Darcy get teased so astutely and mercilessly? :D
| Elivra26 6/5/11 . chapter 1
Funny! Miss Darcy does seem to have some gumption after all!
| the dark euphie 4/13/11 . chapter 1
I always loved how he was captured by her eyes.
| Sapphire Dawn 9/5/10 . chapter 1
LOL she is funny.
| Gabsy422 4/3/10 . chapter 1
| hippogriff-tamer 8/26/09 . chapter 1
I like Georgiana teasing her brother
| HawkAngel XD 7/24/09 . chapter 1
aw so sweet!
| Rob-girl 1/30/09 . chapter 1
Such a great family moment. :) Good job.
| Simply Kiwi 8/14/08 . chapter 1
| Kendra Luehr 7/28/08 . chapter 1
Truly lovely! :) There was a time when I, too lingered on every fine description, but my teachers started to write "Get to the point!", so I unfortunately abandoned that habit. I enjoyed your vocabulary and descriptions immensely, because I love words (yes, I AM a word geek :-P). My only critique is that Mr. Darcy was far too warm. Although it was nice to see Georgiana and Mr. Darcy all jovial in comparison to Austen's typical characterization, I just couldn't see Mr. Darcy actually laughing and admitting his defeat. From what I recollect, he was a very proud and haughty man, and wasn't very warm even after he declared his affections for Jane. Other than that, lovely job! ;)
| moonservant 7/28/08 . chapter 1
While your dialogue was very Austen-y and impressive, your characterization was a tad lacking. Georgiana, I liked her. This is the playful, lightheartedness I could see her with. But Mr. Darcy, he was too easily caught off guard. He is a very defensive character and would not have given into her comments so easily. I almost felt that you rushed the end. The writing was wonderful and Georgiana was good, but I was disappointed with Darcy. Just food for thought.
| Isha-libran 6/9/08 . chapter 1
Oh, lovely. Very in tune with the Austen style, I loved this look at a more lighthearted Georgiana and Darcy. Thanks for sharing this! )
| Amber Jade-Black 8/24/07 . chapter 1
This is a great one shot. Short, sweet and to the point.
| lazaefair 8/9/07 . chapter 1
Hahaha, cute! Darcy is a teddy bear at heart, this fangirl firmly believes.
And you got the Austenian style of dialogue perfectly down, though your physical descriptions are a little florid.