Oh, please to be continuing this!

more please

pyro and toad truly have to be the best characters ever (hopefully not as a pairing, though, Brits and Aussies don't mix, that I would know). you write amazingly and the only thing that I could possibly ever say in critcism to either of the two stories of yours that I have read is: WHERE THE ** ARE THE IRISH MUTANTS!! We have a right to a mutant! Gr! (maybe I shall write to marvel comics, hmm?)

I really liked the bit at the end, where John could forget all his pain with the reclaiming of his powers for himself. Just seeing him being able to BE himself for the first time since we've really seen him in this story was pretty moving.

I have a bit of a medical background, so the substitute of cold for electricty in restarting John's heart kind of made me scratch my head, but that wasn't really the point of that scene. The point was Bobby ever-so-absentmindedly caressing John's chest. (Hot!)

I also really liked Bobby's pointed realization that he's not in Kansas anymore, and he really has no way to get back over the rainbow. His best friend is hurt and barely been dragged back from death, and how exactly would he explain going willingly along with the enemy? He's stuck in a cage of partially his own making, and there's no real good way of returning to the status quo. That's going to make the subsequent chapters very, very interesting indeed.

I'm looking forward to seeing how this unfolds.

OMG please continue... I love bobby/john >.

Soon as I saw the summary, I was like...xD I LOVE this pairing! Second favorite for X-Men, I think. So um, anyways, you're doing a good job playing out there emotions and all (I'm reviewing for all the chapters so far), so keep up the good work!!

Please update as soon as possible^_^...

It seems you like long reviews...well,that was me at the past but I never wrote long reviews after a certain incident...anyways,I'll try.

What I like...I guess when Mystique said something in a certain language,it's very mysterious and fun to know what is the real meaning of it...'if' you decided to reveal what she's saying to make Azreal that less of a crude.

What I don't like the most,I'm glad you asked...it's that stupid way of saying "I’m aiming for a clean ten reviews on this one".Ooh!I'm feeling so bubbly and sarcastic today I'll just say that YOU...focus!YOU should write a story that YOU like and felt happy about it even without reviews cause the best reward is satisfaction...I'm guess you're more experienced that me so I'm in no place to speak in such a manner and it meant no harm so don't take it the wrong way.

Overall,as an X-Play host(in my dreams),I'll give this nearly perfect piece of craft by YOU a 4.6 out of 5.

Just..."Gimme More".

Good luck with your next chapter... I repeat,don't take it the wrong way,I'm just had a sudden outburst but I'll say sorry just in case you got mad or something.

Yes,it's definitely complicated for my low level of understanding...but still fun to read.

Not much to say...I believe I said giving you an answer at the next chapter so prepare for the worst...of the best.

...it seems like 'more than one sentence in a review' is your motto...I agree,sometimes I hated it when a review is less than 3 words.

I think I like the part of that new guy...I forgot his name but it's definitely fresh,it's nice to put an original character.

I must say that the answer can be given at chapter 6.

...well...it's likable...that's all I could say for now...I'll just read the next chapter.

I. Love. It. ...there, that was three. ...AH! LOVE IT! PYRO! YOU'RE AWAKE! YAYAYAYAYAY! loves! LUHVE!

Demanding little authoress, aren't you?Don't worry, I won't read and run. Here's the review:

First off, I'd like to thank you for dedicating this chapter, never happened to me before. (chuckles) I like every single chapter that you wrote and this made it much sweeter.

So John was almost a goner for the second around, huh? Glad that Bobby was around to lend a hand.

I like how you incorporated John's point of view, although it was blurry due to his conditions, the emotions were there. Well written.

I've taken quite a liking to Garret, he even manage to be sarcastic in such a dire situation. The support from Toad was also a great help since Garret didn't need to finish his requests.

Bobby's hesitance to touch the smaller boy was quite amusing to read. I was torn between 'aww, that is so cute, he subconscously knew that he like the pyromaniac' and 'what the hell are you doing, the man's dying! Touch him already!'

The fact the he traced the scar was also an added bonus.

Gosh, Garrett is such a crude character. Simply liking a lot. Pissy little thing, isn't he?

"What was it with these people and personal space issues? How the heck did John last even a week here?"

This is my favourite line in this chapter. (chuckles) Yes, yes. I agree, however did the boy survived with such a grope-y (is that even a word?) lot.

Warms the heart that even though Mystique has become somewhat nice (almost motherly, if I may add), she still retains assassin's instinct. (chuckles) You really nailed her character right on the head. Congratulations.

So, Pyro's up, huh? And he has the comfort of his flames again. (sighs) I'm so glad that he'll be okay.

Really interesting how you tackle his character when he woke up. He's still the same Pyro. In other stories, he had woken up to see the error of his way, etcetera, etcetera, etcetera. You stood up above the rest, and I commend you for that original thought.

Yo, its me! :3 I just find it hard to believe Pyro is a class four. I'm sure he wasn't anything like that in the comic books, which I live by! *Could you tell?* I hated the third movie! But, yeah, mini-rant, anyways, its a good story so far. Its just the beginning, things have moved pretty quickly, and then slowed down, so I can't wait for another twist! *That was a compliment, by the way!*

Yeah, I hear you on the Mary Sue syndrome. >_< I do like OC's though. I have invented some of my own, but I'm terrified that they're pathetic, or Mary Sue-ish. Do you think you'd like to take a peek at 'em, and tell me what you think? If not, that's cool

I like Garrett. Smart ** and emotionless. Both endearing qualities, don't you think? (chuckles)

He's a level 4 alright. What about Mystique. What's her level?So much damage done to John. Poor guy.

Liking it so far. A good read. Strong plot and structure. Fluid. A steady pace. Over all, quite enjoyable.