Awesome piece of writing. Not only felt the pain Sam did but also felt the emotions Dean did, your words were so vivid and descriptive. Wow.

Whoa, bloody intense. But I want to know how Sam ended up with a bullet in him? The things they hunt don't usually *shoot* back at them.
Sue

I enjoyed your story very much. I love stories that are not emotional outlets for the fans. This is exactly what would happen in the show should Sam be shot. Thank you.

That was damn good. I'm a nurse and I was totally sucked into this one.

I liked the Winchester's First Aid Kit: Not Sold in Stores.

Ouch.

That was the best first-aid scene I have ever read, and I've been reading fanfic for over ten years. Angsty without being girly. I'm stunned at how good it was.

Java Head

I really liked this. Well its Sam whumpage so whats not to like? But you write really vividly and I love the visuals. I have to say I'm a sucker for that. I love to read and see a picture coming life before my eyes and you really succeed with that. Great little one shot. I loved Dean's emotions throughout.

Just found the story... great short story... but how do you know all the details on what a bullet wound looks like? Jost curious... thanks
Pip

Good graphic detail. Nice one mate!

I really liked this.

It captures the moment and mood so well.

I don't know how I missed your stories. This was great!

Well, great in a really OMG sort of way. (c:

Great description and angst/pain.

Poor boys.

Jeez...how did i miss this one?Had my belly in knots the whole time i was reading it...i felt like i was there,i could feel both their pain...you are so good.

Wow,just wow.

Awesome. Just awesome

Absolutely loved this. The detailed description you put into it is amazing! Anything with limp!sam in pleases me, but this was fantastic! Great Job!

oh, the intenseness!
is it bad that the weed comment made me giggle??
nice oner!

Wow! This was great! The details were amazing! I could visualize everything and you wrote it so tense. I loved how serious Dean was, totally dedicated to save Sam and how little the brothers talked indicated how bad the situation was. THe little talking they did do was so in keeping with the desperateness of the situation! Great job! Loved limpSam and DEAN in this!