Aw, how sweet that Byakuya is wearing the scarf anyway :)

Ha! Loved it, I thought it was gonna end without anything happening, good for me the last line gave me enough reason to smile at myself like an idiot haha, nice work.

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omg I love it, so darn cute, I love yaoi that isn't too overstated, it's just sweet. I can totally picture this, completly and totally. I love how Renji acts, obsessing about the shawl, and I always wanted to see something stemming from that battle. Great, I'm adding to my favorites!:)

Kuchiki-taichou doesn’t look up when he leaves, signing a document and adjusting his shawl.

Near the hem is a tiny red stain.


That's got to be the most (un?)romantic little insert I have ever read. ^^

Great work, a few grammar mistakes (missing spaces) but I've had that happen to me before.

New style of writing and I LIKE IT!

Hope for more chapters!

That was a really awesome story, well written and I think not distractingly out of character. I really enjoyed reading it, way to go D:

This fic shows perfectly everything I love about ByaRen.

It's smooth, subtle, gentle and so very touching.

That chapter on the manga is definitely one of my favortits, and the way you used it for the fic was adorable! ;O;

Really, a great fic.

I love it! It's cute! The last two lines were definitely my favourite.