 yllom21 2009-05-17 . chapter 1I totally agree. Hiyoshi needs a lot more love. Amusing little fic, but sad because this is actually realistic. |
 M3lanch0ly 2009-04-16 . chapter 1Yes, Hiyoshi is always left out... I have a soft spot for unimportant characters, so I pretty much favour him... |
 thesoulofthegreatbell 2009-02-26 . chapter 1kakaka! That was Funny!
Hiyoshi is left behind... and no one noticed...
Poor Him |
 Frog-kun 2009-01-08 . chapter 1Ah, poor Hiyoshi! I didn't even remember who he was when I first started reading but I had to laugh as I was reading through the fic. Lol. |
 Peridot Tears 2009-01-01 . chapter 1xD Poor Hiyoshi! Took the regulars a while to miss him!
~PT |
 msmarielle 2008-11-20 . chapter 1I love Hyoutei too, but I don't like Hiyoshi. Haha! This is so funny, I love how you make everyone laugh. Jirou and Atobe FTW! |
 Nasty Evil Dead Dog 2008-08-17 . chapter 1*sobs* POOR HIYOSHI. I SHALL AVENGE HIM. |
 carocake 2008-05-17 . chapter 1lawl... If I could remeber who this Hiyoshi was I would feel sorry for him, I'm sure of that. -shot- No, seriously... he's the first Hyotei regular whose name I could remeber. Probably because he played Ryoma... :D
lyk ZOMG your making fun of science museums!1! :| I used to like them ...when I was liek six or seven. But they were great back then!
"Whence they got back to the school, they immediately took to the tennis courts."
Is 'whence' really the correct word there? And...maybe there should be an 'off' after the took. .x
But I don't know... I'm kind of uneducated in the vast variety of meaning "take" can have...
I'm kind of uneducated in general and I think you wouldn't read this anyway as I'm ranting too much again and you probably won't have the time to correct anything anyway if there even is a mistake. |
 Kw n-sn 2007-10-18 . chapter 1 Fun! |
 Aikan-4242564 2007-07-08 . chapter 1LOL. I guess Hiyoshi's one of those too-plain-to-be-noticed kinda guy. Good fic |
 shr0omx3 2007-07-06 . chapter 1 aw.. poor hiyoshi =D |
 Yorozuya Gin-san 2007-06-26 . chapter 1Aw, poor Hiyoshi! >.< I would never forget him! He's too awesome... but very um-nessasary. lol He had to hitch hike home, seriously, poor guy. |
 Tressa 2007-06-24 . chapter 1Ack! Poor Hiyoshi! He does seemed overlooked alot. This was a hilarious one-shot. And at the end, wow, I burst out laughing so hard. Poor Hiyoshi, they left him.
Great job. This was so funny. |
 wolf fullmoon 2007-05-23 . chapter 1XD
Yeah...I always forget Hiyoshi-kun too...it's kinda sad that he's so easily forgotten even though he's not really all that bad looking... |
 Nezrin 2007-04-22 . chapter 1Aw! I just so love Hiyoshi! I like him the best! How could the others be so cruel to him!? |