 StarTrekFan83 2009-08-29 . chapter 1Very nicely written. I enjoyed your vocabulary as it was broad, but not over the top. Awesome writing! |
 Clever Lass 2009-02-12 . chapter 1 Delightful! |
 Joy 2008-05-31 . chapter 1 You are a very good writer. Though i don't think Hermione would know if Sevie wanted to kiss her or not, she's not that much of a flirt. not bad. |
 VaMpIrAn LoVer 2008-03-28 . chapter 1review dance eh? well how could i not review with something like that!, i liked it..i was sweet and u kept severus mostly in character unlike most...all out 8\10 very nice
u couldnt at all read on of mine n review now could u? soz im just desperate |
 Miss Loquacious 2008-03-05 . chapter 1I like it. Good stuff. |
 quik-wit 2007-10-28 . chapter 1cute |
 Portkeys Miss-Mione 2007-07-28 . chapter 1Fresh, dried or fricasseed! LOL
It has been a while since I read something with a plot as uncomplicated as this one, but I sincerely loved it all the way through. I like your humour too, especially that one line, and the way you write both Severus' and Hermione's thoughts and lines is totally perfect.
I'm off to look for more of your stuff.
Cheers,
Sara. |
 Lithium Choker 2007-04-27 . chapter 1Very atmospheric. Maybe it's just my love for Heathcliff but the situation suited him well.
Have a virtual cookie. |
 amsev 2007-04-23 . chapter 1Lovely. I saw them walking on the moor, in their dark robes, amongst the beautiful, yet sometimes dangerous, wild flowers. The heat was just waiting to happen. |
 Verdenia 2007-04-04 . chapter 1Yay! ;D
I came over to see if it was viewable, and it is! Very cute fic!
I especially loved:
"arms that were, if not wide open, at least somewhat ajar."
Hee! Good times! |
 Marionette 2007-04-03 . chapter 1I don't even really like SS/HG, and I thought that was adorable. :) |
 green eyed goddess532 2007-04-01 . chapter 1Lovve it sweet and cute and funny with a sweet plot! great job! love the ending line hahah |
 swim freak 9000 2007-04-01 . chapter 1Well written, but HG + SS is just...disturbing. Well, there you go. *waits for review dance* |
 Little Eirtae 2007-03-31 . chapter 1Oh, I simply love it.
Snape as Heathcliff = perfect! |
 aimoon 2007-03-28 . chapter 1 this was sweet, write more! |