AH! Where are the last three chapters noo!!
The first chapter was so kinky and the others were really good too but please put the last ones up you left me hanging!

Love! > w <

Please please please please upload the revised version!

Or, if you've decided to give up on revising, upload the original version.

The chapters that are there are :)

Missing later chapters is :(

The early chapters are very good, but I'm having trouble waiting for the revisions! Good luck with the re-writing!

to amazing for words.faved

Wow. It's amazing how Raito and L can act like this is nothing...

Wow, that was kinky... I liked the "behind the cameras" scenes. At least those people are sensible.

angels_burn of LJ here. You reminded me that I have not yet reviewed! Bad, bad me. Keep up the delicious work, I am liking where this is going and it's almost like reading a whole new story entirely. Also, if you get the time you should repost this whole thing completely so it bumps it back to the top of the list. Y'know since it says it's last activity was in '07. You're awesome, Harley! <3

oh, such a pity T_T I think I liked the story more how it was...is there anywhere on the web that has the old version?

strange but good

You...you broke my brain. XD Stupid curiosity, I couldn't stop reading...

...love how they were just so freakin' technical about it the whole time...

...agh... I'm not sure if I should be disturbed or needing lots and lots of ice, or what. Funny thing is, it isn't the topic itself so much as the characters and the fact I'm well acquainted with them...more or less...

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...also, yes, the way L eats his sweets is hot. XD

Aw maan your writing style is amazing XD The way you portrayed L was soo funny. especially his dialogue. Great Job!

I LOVE IT!KYA!ja ne!~ PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!

I CANNOT FATHOM HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS! favorite! ja ne!~ PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!

I LOVE IT!ja ne!~ PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!

yea...i think the face raito didnt get fudge-packed by L is a great thing. nothing needs to come in contact with a hole that has bodily waste coming from it regularly. disgusting. and ive nv had a mental **. i guess it'd be like somebody's wet dream. u no after reading this though it's kinda made me want some chocolate syrup and my boyfriend. :( o if only he didnt live so far away and was sleeping right now.