This was absolutely adorable! I thought you had them in character. I loved the names, especially Taruto's XD That was very clever actually.

I know this one shot is like a year old but I just want you to know that I find it really clever how you came up with the names of the Aliens parents. Most people just come up with a random Japanese name or even an English one. While is clear that the majority of the characters are named after edible things. Thank you for being so smart cuz I can actually see the creators using these names ^^

About the story;

I think it's sweet and the OOCness wasn't that bad cuz when Kisshu was injured they interacted in similar way. That's way I can see this happen too. ^^ I like how you made Kisshu interact with Taruto. Still being himself but caring for the younger Alien. I also like how you left in the Japanese tints with the "ne's" and the Suffix they give to family members.

All in all, I liked it and think is was sweet

~Mezu

AAW...THAT WAS SOO KUTE X3
GREAT STORY^^
DOES IT CONTINUE?

I loved it! I like the short little stories about the aliens.

Yay you :3 Awesome cuteness. More fluffy then Tart's hair. And great names :3 Kishus dad - bacon. Haha :3

But Kishu seems a little OC o__o, He, telling Tart to think about his language? Tart, however, is fine :3 He's just a kid, after all. Overall, lovely story.

You did, in my opinion, fairly well. Pai does sound a bit off key but I believe when their not fighting each other or the Mew mew that's how they are- 'brothers'. Kept up the good work! (smiles)

Oh, I might as well said this but I wrote you a review so your other review would be so loney. And it's good to have reviews, it make you feel good that someone out there cares enough to take some time to give you something. Even if it is a note on a failing or working peice of your work because you took time to do this and if you hadn't I would be writing this...

Sorry, I'm rambling. Thanks for writing. Sorry if I don't make any since and sorry for spelling misstakes. (this is the longest review I've ever written...)

-Living on

Aww! This story was so kawaii! I love the way you write. You're really descriptive. Great job!!