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Quite a while? Arw you sure? Aw man, such a drag. But hey, what can I say...?


OTher than that was stilljust as frickin excellent as I said in my first review, only better. I mean, usually I don't read post-CoS, but some sort of fate got me onto this cuz I character searched (using roy and riza; i love royai homey) amd this came up on second page.

I dunno if I mentioned this, but I can totally see this for a sequel to the movie. A sequel's movie sequel, aye?

The action: I love it; its so well plotted, like even though in CoS, Huskisson didn't play a huge part, just the beginning prologue, but here with this fic, you... you know, get to realize his true tole.

The romance: I absolutely love how you shape Hawkeye, y'dig? I mean, I've read a lot of fics where they have so much fluff and you can definately say, "Okay, I know my home-girl she-sniper would never do nothing that'll make her look like a hooker", which is exactly how she ISN'T in this fic. For that, I praise thee. ... Not to mention how Roy reacts. He's not like the so-called womanizer we think, he's... so... what is it? Restricted? Something like that... But, you just gotta love it, eh?

Wow. That's probably the longest review I've ever written. My bad if I wasted your time, but I'm a critic who'll only critic if its THAT good, y'dig?

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I hope that laptop gets workin, buddy. Update soon.

Happy belated Memorial Day!

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Yo, dawg, lemme tell you, this is one hell of a prologue! Seriously, it's really awesome sounding for just a prologue and I can definately imagine something like this happening as a sequel to CoS... And I really wish it would. I mean, like I said, its really, really, really, really great so far. The setting and descriptions, the characters are well played, and hey, the plot's unfolding right before me. I think I'd better keep reading.

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Happy belated Memorial Day!

Huskisson is incredibly evil. I have to reread the story though, I got lost somewhere. Please update soon!

Interesting. I'm caught by the fact that it's Falman and Hughes who are staying behind to fight the chimera - who in the other world are dead, and abducted. I'm curious as to what will happen to him on both sides, and hoping that Maes doesn't die in Germany, because . . . he's already died once and we don't want to miss both of him :(

Also, loving the Royai hints of this chapter, and the mention of Ling at the end.

Good writing again. Good work :)

sweet. i can't wait to see the role ling yao will play. will mei-chan or ran fan appear by any chance?

I can wait. Thankfully you have long chapters. This seems well, to all be spiralling in and winding me up for a good story! I like.

Lovely story and extremely intruiging. I normally don't have the patience to read multi-chap fics but yours is truly engaging. Can't wait til the next installment

While this is an amazing story, the chapters are getting really long. I'm all for long chapters (they usually make for a better read), it makes it hard to read at a point other than when you have a LOT of spare time on your hands. If you could possibly make the chapters a little shorter that would be wonderful :3 That might also solve the problem you had with a long time between updates :)

Other than that, I have absolutely NOTHING to complain about. It was absolutely gorgeous - a work of art ;) I'd say more, but it's my turn to get dinner tonight, and I'm . . . running a little behind because I didn't want to stop in the middle of the chapter :3

Thank you for your lovely work! I can't wait until the next chapter!

something excieting better happen between roy and riza!

Huskisson's lab is either at his villa (which is on the outskirts of Munich) or at Munich University (but that's not where he does his Thule stuff). Thule's HQ is at the villa.

I'm looking forward to your updates!

This is really well written and in depth. A very interesting concept for how the boys can still do transmutations. You really studied the movie didn't you? *laughs*

Love your story. And with Huskisson...it looked like an island...not that that's much help. ^^;

I was browsing through some books at a local bookstore and I discovered that the name Scieszka is actually a Polish surname. So I think 'Scieszka' is the correct spelling for the brown-haired bookworm. I absolutely love history; that's why a like the Nazi and World War accounts here.

The story's quite compelling but I think Hawkweye sounds a little too trigger-happy.

Awsome chapter, although if I remember correctly Falman and Kain bet with Jean and Breda all the time. And neither of them really ever object. Just saying that. But other than that love the story! And I really loved the little RizaxRoy fluff^_^