...:'( Aw, How...sad! Gosh, reading stories like this make me tear up!.. Wonderful work, and good wording! I love it!

This is so good. Applausable, really. I love it!

So sad! I did like when he said, "You will never leave me." though.

wow! that was sad yet romantic? it was true though no? i loved it though so good job! yay for u :)

You did a great job writing this fic. I loved it.

Actually, I thought this was very good. I can imagine it being this way for Rin and Sess when she's older. Time is against them. And besides all that, you're a wonderful writer. Keep up the great work.